Ibukun's Detailed Story Review Requests

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{OPEN TO NEW REQUESTS. Link Below}

Please read this,

I get overwhelmed easily, so I’m trying not to crowd this comment section as much as I can. I also want to make sure I don’t accidentally overlook anyone’s request. :tipping_hand_woman:t5: :tipping_hand_woman:t5: :tipping_hand_woman:t5:

Once I hit 10-15 requests, I automatically stop taking new requests via this thread. They will have to be sent to my waitlist in the link below until I update the status to "Open."

So please, if you would really want me to review your story — and for the sake of my sanity lol — join my review waitlist below. That’s all you need to do :upside_down_face: :upside_down_face:
Once I get the notification that you have sent in your answers, I will verify in this thread, that I have received your request.

https://linktr.ee/ibukunt

I’ll also be posting a review of the stories I love from this thread on my IG!

Please be patient. My goal is to read as many episodes as I can, and give extensive, thoughtful, constructive, easy to comprehend and useful feedback.
You guys have so many great ideas. I deeply want to help you realize the full potential of your stories, and look at the re-edited versions — after you’ve implemented my tips — and be proud of the extra effort you put into it like a proud mom :cry: :cry:
I put in a lot of time and work to provide everyone with unique feedback based on the details in your stories.

Please credit me on IG: @eppy.ibby after I have sent in your review. That’s the only rule. Your girl is trying to start a small business.

My story on episode with my co-writer IG: @akilah_writes :point_down:t4::point_down:t4:

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Hey so my story is new and has only like 3 episodes rn but I wouldn’t mind some feedback that’s not from my friends
The story is called New Chapter
Episode name Meli

(it’s my first story so it’s not that good :blush:)

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I’d be glad to! Mine only has 3 episodes for now too lol. I’ll check it out and get back to you.

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Ok i will asap I’m writing rn sorry

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No worries. You can do it whenever you have the time to!

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thanks :sparkling_heart:

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Hey! I would love a submit a request - my story titled is “The Cabaret Dancer” (Talie). It’s a Limelight romance with choices and limited CC. It would mean a lot if you check it out! :smiley:

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I’m done reading your story

I’ll check it out! I’ll let you know what my feedback is when I’m done.

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Do you want me to post my feedback here or in your DM?

do you mind reviewing my story? you can pm me your opinion :pleading_face:

Author name: Mistletoe
Instagram: @episode.mistletoe
Style: Limelight
Genre: Adventure (and some fantasy later on)
Description: You enroll in Aequor Academy, thinking it would be a normal, boring summer. But when you come across a secret room, you discover there’s so much more to the academy than it seems.

  • customization
  • choose LI gender
  • mini-games
  • advanced directing
  • point system
  • choose body type

Cover:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5895955347079168

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Hey!
Could I get a story review :pleading_face:


Credits: @/molly247
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6693962871144448
Dm me on IG if anyone is intersted in R4R

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I’ll take a look at it!

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definitely!

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thank you :pleading_face:

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No problem :slight_smile:

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Hey there! I’m only one chapter into my story, but I would love some initial impressions and feedback so that I know if there are any major changes I should make before investing more time into it! :sweat_smile: My Insta is @calli_epi if you’d prefer to dm!

My story is called Goddess of Nothing, and it’s a fantasy/mystery hybrid. Here’s the link!

The official summary lol:

One wears charm like a cloak. One holds a deadly secret. One has too much to prove. One doesn’t exist. And all four are competing against you to be the 12th Olympian. (4 LIs, LGBT)

It’s only my first story, so it’s not great, but I would love to hear whatever initial feedback you have! Thank you so much!

PS: please ignore the audio, I’m adding more music but I haven’t checked how it sounds yet haha

This group does reviews, if you need it done! :smiley:

I’ll like a story review and u can DM me right here
Title I won’t go without you
Author name: Luna Martinez 1
Instagram: @episode_luna_martinez
Style: Limelight
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
**Description:**Your character Amber gets caught up in a deal made with the devil himself. Now ur trying to find a way home before it’s too late and your whole life changes. But will you find love along the way? LL, CC



Thank you for ur time
:relaxed:

Hey! Currently I revamped my story and need some opinions on whether this is okay…Could you maybe try reading a few episodes? If you can… :sweat_smile:

Title : Hollywood Spy
Author : Magic
Genre : Romance and mystery (mystery comes out later in the story…)
Story style : Limelight
Story Description : A money-driven girl gets a job offer to go undercover as a model and spy on other celebs. Can she keep up with the love, drama, murder, protect her loved ones, and keep her secret?
Episodes : 20, more episodes coming soon
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6671297172340736
Cover :