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#42

Thank you so so so much!! :heart:


#43

Would be really happy about feedback for my first story. :slight_smile:

Titel: Wherever I go
Author: Alisha Sophie
Genre: Romance and a lot of drama
Description: Mia and her twin brother Cody lost everything. They try to get their lives back on track, but it ens in a lot of heartache and drama. Will everything be all right in the end?
Instagram: episode.alishasophie
Link: episodeinteractive.com/s/4613203588415488

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#44

Thank you, I’m glad you read and enjoyed it :slight_smile: and I’ll definitely fix those errors haha . What’s the name of yours? I’ll read your story as well :slight_smile:


#45

Hi,
Review my story “I am Dating a Liar” I am new to this.

Name - I am Dating a Liar
Author - Amiara
Genre - Drama
Episode - 5 out (ongoing)
Description - Ava had horrible past so she is afraid to date anyone. She started working in new company where her boss try to get her so she lied to ignore her boss that she is already dating.
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5425545387311104

Thank you.


#46

instagram - sandy_candy6238


#47

Thanks sm for the review! I’ll try to add more choices in future episodes of Jellyfished :wink:


#48

Hello! Here’s my review on the first three episodes of SHANKED!
Disclaimer: This review is meant to help you! Please do not take offense to it!

Creativity (10 out of 10)

  • I think this story is very creative and thought out!

Storyline (13 out of 15)

  • The storyline so far is great! My only problem is that it is moving kind of quickly. I feel like it does not go in enough depth for every scene.

Directing (20 out of 20)

  • The directing so far is amazing! I really like the mirror scene in the first episode and the zooms.

Grammar mechanics (out of 10)
I cannot really judge this…

Choices (17 out of 20)

  • There weren’t a ton of choices, but I appreciated that they mattered.

Engaging/stays interesting (10 out of 10)

  • The story stays pretty interesting! I like the incorporation of slang lol.

Episode length (10 out of 10)

  • The length of the episodes are good!

Character customization (out of 5)
No customization

I think your story is super interesting and exciting! Keep up the good work!

Final score: 80 out of 85


#49

Thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed it! I will try add more choices and try slow things down, thanks again!


#50

Hey guys! I won’t be accepting any new requests for reviews currently because I want some time to work on my story and with school and sports, I can barely find time to review your stories! You guys can feel free to review each others, though! I’m taking a break but I’ll definitely be back in a couple of days or so!


#51

#52

Topic closed due to one month of inactivity.


#53