Story Reviewing/tips (constructive)


Hello everyone!
My name is Nova (obviously) and me and my two friends - @CordeliaM and @KHartley are going to start reviewing stories :slightly_smiling_face:
We’ll only read the first three episodes (unless we fall in love and continue lmao)
Also, we’d rather if the story is relatively new published from January this year (2018) and onwards

We promise to be honest, kind and give constructive, not destructive criticism.

We’re not your average reviewers, so don’t treat us like them x
We’re here to help, not hinder.
Also, we are all students with busy lives so sorry if we don’t spot your story, if we don’t respond then don’t be afraid to send your story again! Please don’t spam us though x

What we need from you:
Story title,
Story genre,
Story link,
Author name,
Age (if you’re comfortable sharing)
Your nationality (reference to spelling)
And anything else you want to include! x


Story title: H & V: From Zero to Hero
Story genre: Comedy/action
Story link:
Author name: Dr.Smile
Description: Jax is the disabled loser of Mediocreopolis High, but one odd day, his life is completely transformed by a–burrito?! Drama, choices, romance, evil, deception, and action await.
Age: 16
I live in the US so spelling should be judged accordingly.
And anything else you want to include! x
Thank you!


Awesome! We’ll check it out asap and get back to you in pm :slight_smile:


Hey @Nova.H ! Thanks for creating this thread! I would like a review of my story!!!
Hope you will like it :heart:

Story title : Sandy and her Quadruplets
Story genre : Comedy
Story link :
Author name : R.J.
Description : How can she survive with noisy and disobedient quadruplets? Will she finally find the father of her sons ? Here’s the crazy life of Sandy and her quadruplets

I’m 23 and I’m French Canadian (sorry for the mistakes, I’m doing some improvements now :sweat_smile:)


Thanks again!


Hi there @r.j.14

I’m one of the other reviewers - this could get a little chaotic! But we’re looking forward to checking out your story, we’ll get back to you soon.



Hey!! I have no problem with that!!! ( I’m patient :slight_smile: )


I love constructive criticism!
Story title, Sophisticated & Deceived
Story genre, Romance
Story link,
Author name, Briana M.
Description, Ashden, a 26 year old young women learns that life isn’t always about being emotionless and sophisticated. Will a guy help her, and navigate her through her hard life?
Age. 17 y/o
Your nationality: African American
Instagram: @brianam.stories
Twitter: @BrianaStories


Hi, girls!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for! Btw, @CordeliaM has already helped me with the story description, so a huge thank you again for that!

Sooooo, my story includes:

  • choices that matter (4 possible endings)
  • 4 mini-games
  • animated overlays and custom backgrounds (ALL the backgrounds are custom)
  • special art scene (everything, including the cover is drawn by yours truly)
  • and, of course, a captivating plot with multiple unexpected twists!

Here is the video trailer I made so that you can get a better idea what the story is about:

My story details:

Name of story: Fantastical: Black Shadow
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3
Summary of story: Having women on board is considered bad luck? Well, as the most wanted pirate captain, you’ll certainly bring the worst luck to anyone who dares cross your path. CC, choices matter
Link to story:


Hi! Here are my two stories I’d love for you to review-

Quiet Confidence

Story title: Quiet Confidence
Author’s Name: Winter05 with S.Dsana
Genre: Drama
Story style: INK
Description of the story: People don’t talk to you, but not because of your status. What will happen when a billionaire sets his eyes on you to take you to the top?
Number of episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Instagrams: @winter05.episode with @princesssana_sa

Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future

Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Customization?: Limited
Style: INK
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 6 [COMPLETE]
Story Description: All it takes is one shot to change your whole life. Win or lose, nothing will ever be the same.
Instagram Names: @winter05.episode with @penroyalty
Story Link:

Thank you! I hope you enjoy them! :heart:

~ :snowflake:


Hi @Briana_M @WinterMoon05 and @Alex_Af (this will make me finally read that story!)

We’ll get back to all of you soon!



Thank you very much!



Thank you! :heart:


Thanks so much!


Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Age: 17
Nationality: Syrian
Instagram: emberpackepisode :smile::heartbeat:


We’ll get back to you soon!



thank you so much!!:blush:


Hi!! I would love a review of my story…:blush:

My story includes-

  1. Custom Backgrounds
  2. Some mini games.
  3. Special art scene.

Story details-

Story title- Fantastical: Virtues of Destiny
Story genre- Fantasy
Story link-
Author name- S.Dsana
Episodes- 3 [ONGOING]
Description-Evil is rising, truth is surpassing, but what will happen when they find out who they really are? Is this going to lead to love, hate, revenge or magical encounter.
Choices Matter
Instagram- @princesssana_sa
Your nationality- Indian

Thank you!!!


Hey! Thank you so much for this - I have two stories, so you can review both if you’d like, but if not then just doing one is fine! (also if you only do one I’d prefer the first one as it’s a contest entry lol)


Title: Fantastical: Flora
Genre: Fantasy/adventure
Author name: Mina
Description: In a world where magic is banned, Flora finds herself sacrificing everything to help a group of rebels overthrow a ruthless and tyrannical king.
Nationality: English


Title: Scandalous
Genre: Drama/mystery
Author name: Mina
Description: After the murder of her best friend, Catalina uncovers secrets that change everything she thought she knew, and clues that could lead her to the killer before they strike again.

Thank you so much!


@Mina and @S.Dsana we’re looking forward to reading your stories!