Pending reviews: 8
PLEASE READ BEFORE ASKING FOR A REVIEW!!
Hello everyone. So this is a thread for reviews and reviews ONLY. I would appreciate if you don’t use this thread to merely promote your story. I see some stories on EVERY SINGLE THREAD so if you’re that desperate, this is not the place for you, Next! I will be looking for the following from each story:
-Is your plot complex, or simple? Simple plots can be okay (sometimes) depending on how they are portrayed.
-does the plot flow nicely, move too quickly, too slowly?
-do you have enough cliff hangers to make the readers WANT to keep reading
-do you have too much narration?
-is your plot well explained, or does the narrator need to explain everything.
-do your characters act like human beings or like fictional characters?
-Make characters relatable meaning they have flaws
-are your characters diverse?
-Some characters might not be developed/thought through enough making them confusing
-are the character’s dialog realistic?
-similar to some of the elements mentioned in the plot section
-is your directing choppy?
-small directing errors are excusable, but are they constant?
-try to use custom overlays and backgrounds. This makes stories more interesting
-do you use complex directing, or are lazy with some scenes
-do the choices matter to the plot? Saying stuff like “Mary will remember this” makes the reader feel like their choice had an influence
-do you get lazy with choices?
-do you have ENOUGH choices?
-A few spelling/grammar errors are okay, no one is perfect, but if they are repetitive, it makes the quality go down
-do you use long and complex sentences in dialoguePROOFREAD that wouldn’t necessarily need it?
-PROOFREAD YOUR STORY
Okay, so that’s what you will be reviewed on. I won’t sugar coat anything, and might come across as strict. I’m sorry but I tend to be pretty critical while reviewing. I won’t read more than 10 episodes of your story because I only have so many passes. Remember, this is my opinion, and my opinion only so don’t feel pressured to change anything just because I said so. Each section will weigh a certain amount, and then all of your points will be added together for a final score.
SPELLING? GRAMMER: _____/5
NOTE: Please only request a review if you actually need one and are planning to accept the feedback. These take a REALLY long time because I like to do them thoroughly. Everyone will get a total of 6 complete paragraphs of feedback. Every now and then I may temporarily close the thread to catch up. Any promotion of your story will be deleted
Just leave the details of your story down below and any other factors you may want me to consider while reviewing (ie English may not be your first language etc)