Hello everyone! If anyone has a story that is published, or is soon to be published, I would love to review it for you and give my honest opinion! You can specify what you’d like me to review, or I can just give an overall rating. I will be looking at directing errors, grammatical errors, and a ton more! Here’s are some rules :))
Comment the link to your story, the title, and the description. (If you have an insta include it so we can message on there).
Be patient and wait for me to respond to you!
Don’t get angry with what I say (its my opinions and you don’t have to listen)!
Again this is completely free!! Im just a girl who’s bored and has some extra time on her hands
Hopefully I can help as many new authors as possible
Description: After 15 years, childhood friends Suzie and Daniel meet again. She’s supposed to feel happy about it, but she treats him like a stranger instead.
IG: goji.episode
Link: My story is not yet published, I’ll send the link through dm.
Description: Ivanna Burke is the best FBI profiler in New York. When she’s asked to run a joint confidential task force with Interpol, to catch The times Killer, can she? Or does the killer have other plans?
Moved to Share Feedback since this is for story reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions.
Story: A Dozen + One
Author: Giulianna (Insta Handle: @giulianna_creates)
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Current Episodes: 9
Description: Derek Roberts already has enough to handle at home with eleven siblings, but what will happen when his girlfriend Tracey Donovan gets kicked out of her home and moves in with him?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6073379024601088
Thank you for this
Title: stuck with you
Author: jasmine
Genre: drama romance
Style: LL
Description: Akeelah has always dreamed of being a professional figure skater . When her partner gets hurt, she has not choice but to team up with the guy she hates. What could go wrong?
Hi! I would love a review, thank you very much!!
My ig Is Complicatedperson6,
The title Is The Heir And It Is long historical fictional narrative novel
Thanks a lot for this thread!
Here’s mine! Story Title: The Tale of Alynthia
Genre: Adventure(with Comic Elements)
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 13 (Ongoing) Link to the Story:
Thank you for doing this!
You can message me on instagram: kvds_writes :))
Story Name: A Touch Of Heaven Genre: Romance/Drama Number of episodes: 7 Style: Limelight
Description: Elisa’s life has never been easy. That is until she meets a mysterious stranger, who turns her world upside down. With her fear of falling in love, can she resist him?
Hey, @mer.stories !
This is so nice of you to do! My story’s name is ICARUS. I would be so grateful to hear your thoughts on it! And don’t worry, you can be as honest and brutal as you’d like (I work as a teacher, so I know how great some feedback can be) My instagram is @archangel.stories if you’d like to write there instead Hope you’ll enjoy it!
Story description A cunning detective and an evasive criminal cross paths and together they realize that flying too close to the sun might be their greatest downfall.
Hello, thank you so much for this thread. I would love to know your honest opinion about my story .
Title : Life in Demby (revamped) Author : Megz_episode Description : Group of new students arrive in the university of Demby to start their new life. What will happen when the mysterious Author try to draw them into his sick, twisted GAME? Cover :
Title - The Magic School Author - Silver Insta - _silver.shade71 / _silver.epi
Genre - Fantasy/Mystery Story Style - Limelight Chapters - 5 Description - Magic, does it exist? You got to know that you’re the most powerful magical but with that comes secrets. Will you be able to handle the pressure? |CC| Games| LI
Hi! Thank you for doing this, my story has 0 reads so I would really love advice!
Title: In Apnoea
Description: This story tries to portray what teenagers face on a daily basis, or the main and most hard obstacles they find. Many serious issues are discussed in order for everyone to identify himself in the story (I only published 3 chapters but much more on every character’s struggles will be discussed further on). Some topics are: eating disorders, mental health, parent’s abandonment …
I would really love and overall review and advice on how to boost it. Thanks for what you do, really
And don’t worry, you can be as honest and brutal as you’d like (I work as a teacher, so I know how great some feedback can be) My instagram is 
