Hi! Thank you for doing this, my story has 0 reads so I would really love advice!
Title: In Apnoea
Description: This story tries to portray what teenagers face on a daily basis, or the main and most hard obstacles they find. Many serious issues are discussed in order for everyone to identify himself in the story (I only published 3 chapters but much more on every character’s struggles will be discussed further on). Some topics are: eating disorders, mental health, parent’s abandonment …
I would really love and overall review and advice on how to boost it. Thanks for what you do, really 