Story Reviews Here

Hello everybody! I’ve decided that I will make a new topic about story reviews.

100% in total


I’ll also give you feedback :3


Story Title:
How many chapters you want me to read:


Story Title: Scars
How many chapters you want me to read: 3
Description: The past created who she is right now. Life never goes easy on her. That’s why she became so ruthless to everyone she’s ever met.

Thanks for this thread!

Joke’s On You
1-3 (I’ll leave it up to you)
Stryker is a sophomore in college who also thinks he is a prankster. What happens when he meets his match? All is not fair in love and war.
Male mc

Story Title: The Star Necklace

Number of chapters I want u to read: it’s up to you

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity


Form : Gave extra info!
Title : The New Girl In Town
Author : Kelsey leann
Genre : Drama
Style : Ink
Number of chapters I want you to read : 4
CC : You can customize the MC and other important characters!
Summary : After having a hard, troubled past. Lydia is forced to move to Florida for safety and return to her daily life. Will you fit in? Will your past find you? Only time will tell.
Link :

Thank you!! :relaxed:

Clue: The Bow


Ever read a story from 1940?

1940, the year of war, murder, and unjust.

You are playing as Beverly Davis. Beverly is the receptionist at the Chandelier Hotel in Los Angeles. What’s going to happen when strange thing start happening in the hotel? All because of a Bow?

Full CC, Timed Choices, Point System, Choices Matter (could lead to DEATH)

Title: Clue: The Bow

Author: London

Genre: Mystery

Style: Limelight

Number of Episodes: 4


Get ready to put your detective hats on!

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I would love some feedback :slight_smile:
Title: I made the devil cry
Description: You’re a soldier, trying to save the kingdom from darkness. There’s just one problem - the fate you can’t escape from. But you can always try.
If you won’t mind, I would like to have all five chapters reviewed, thank you!!

Hello I would love your feedback! :nerd_face::hugs:

Author: C.W.Kingston
Instagram: c.w.kingston
Title: And Remember
Episodes: 7 (and more)
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance

Description: They say that if you truly love someone, the whole universe will conspire to bring you to them. Will it? For Matt and Ravina?

Review would be appreciated :heart:

Clue: The Wrong Lead
3 please :heart:
Rosa’s manor is haunted, Ellen disappeared and now you came to live in it. Is your love for Hamlet pure enough or will you be gone the same way as Ellen? CC, Choices Matter


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Story title: Love Vault
1-3 chapters (If you read even the first one, it would be greatly appreciated.)
Drama, romance and some comedy.
Two law students, Tara Hart and Kyle Night, are forced to end their relationship of 2 years due to Kyle’s well known father. Many obstacles are to come.
I literally just published this!
I would greatly appreciate your opinion on this story.
I worked really hard on it.
Thank you :heart:

U can read 5 chapters from mine . I would love review from u.
Author: Madhu
Story Title: Black Hearts, Golden Desires
Genre: Fantasy
Description: Nand is a princess of Solataria, along with her better two halves, her sisters. But what will happen if an old enemy arises back for revenge? Will Nand be able to handle it?
Chapter: 7 (more coming up soon)
Instagram: @epi.madhubhgd



  • If u like my story, give it a shoutout in IG or in forum by tagging me at Insta: @epi.madhubhgd And In Forum:@Madhu

Hi, thanks for this thread :heart: I would appriciate 3 chapters :blob_hearts:
Falling For Bad :skull:
Plot : Two ex-best friends,one with anger problems and one with cyclothymia disorder.
Both are bad for Kate,but one is going to win her heart.
[LL,CC,Point System,Choice Matter,Minigames]
Episodes : 10
Status : On going
Gerne : Romance & Drama :heart_eyes: & :pensive:
Style : Limelight
CC : Available :white_check_mark:
Also : In my story, I use New Backgrounds other from Episode’s Art Catalogue and Overlays .
My story contains, Minigames & Point System and your choices matter and affect your status with the characters! :smile:
Link :
My IG : @nellyy.epi

Story Cover [Made by me] :

Story Title: Saint Gehenna
How many chapters you want me to read: As many as you like, but I’d recommend three at least.
Description: The story revolves around Saint Gehenna, a rock group from the fictional city of Saint John, and the misadventures of it’s five members: Martin, Neil, Nathan, Bates and John…

Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Chapters: 24 published chapters - I appreciate feedback on as many of them as you can read. The first three are opening the story and are a bit confusing to create an atmosphere for the big reveal about the plot.
Description: Queen Darja spent 20 years searching for her long lost family. Is it in her destiny to suffer without her love and her child? Who will she become while fighting for her loved ones?

I would love a review!

Story Name - Beyond Repair
Author - Giana
Genre - Romance
Episodes - 3
Summary - After a tragic accident Lola leaves her hometown hoping to find herself again, but she finds someone else instead, Is Lola capable of love or if she broken beyond repair?
Style - Ink

Hey! I would love for you to review my story! :blush: Thank you so much and I hope you like it! :black_heart:

Name: Where the Shadows Belong
Author: Dani
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure
Episodes: 3
Description: Alexia has known the demon world for as long as she remembers, but still, her life was simple until she decided to join supernatural hunters. And you? Are you willing to join them?
Style: Limelight

Hello, I would love for my story to be reviewed!

FORM: steph
Story Title: The perfect crime
How many chapters you want me to read: All 3 if possible since i would like to know if its too obvious who the killer is or not yet
Description: The perfect crime does not exist… RIGHT?!
Find the clues, solve the case, and find the killer … before he kills YOU!
choices matter in this story!
Thank you!

Story Title: Mum knows best
How many chapters you want me to read: I have published 28, so as many as you can get through
Description: Brainwashed teenager nicola has suffered from years of abuse at the hands of her mother will she be able to find a way out? Contains violence, self harm + CC choices matter tappable choices

Important Info:My story Is completed!, There is a lot of triggers in my story, Its a dramatic, romantic story
My story has been quotes my readers “A classical take to flowers in the attic”
“I don’t have much to say about your story besides is absolutely beautiful”.



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