Story reviews..I will grade your stories and give feedback

Okay,so I’m going to reviews you guys stories and tell you guys how can you do better and how you do on a scale one to ten… Please send your stories.

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Do you do unpublished stories?? :heart:

Closed case by Moon :crescent_moon:
Romance
Episodes: 5 (more coming soon)
Description: You are a successful detective, you have wonderful friends and family. But what happens when you meet your match in an interesting way? CC, Point system, Choices matter
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Thank you in advance for this x

Title: Blessing in Disguise
By: Eva.T
Genre: Romance
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5079262508154880

Hi,
I would love a review :slight_smile:
Title: I made the devil cry
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Thank you!

I would love a review

My story The Star Necklace has two versions ink and limelight you can choose the version you like

My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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Here’s my story:

Name: Better Than Ever
Author: Miranda
Episodes: 7 (more coming soon)
Genre: Drama
CC: Yes
Plot: You’re a teenage girl with a lot of secrets. What happens when you start looking for your parent’s killer? Will Derek change you? Your killer may be closer than you think…

Hope you enjoy!

story title: STARLESS
genre: Adventure
chapters: 3
story description: You find yourself in a mysterious island with a group of criminals. There is only one way to survive: be trusted, trust nobody.
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5748231985496064
Thank you <3

Title: Ganglands
Episodes: 11 so far, but more are on the way
Genre: Romance
Description: Family is everything to Adam. Will his father change that? Anne Marie is a good girl who fears her father. Will she be brave enough to leave? If she does, will she ever be safe?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5929128717516800

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I would love to have a review from you!
Here is my story:

Title: All The Lights
Author: annawepisode
Description: When I met Ethan Wood I fell in love with him. But can our love and happiness take all the pressure we have because of his career and even my past?
Chapters: 11 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance
Important Info: I am also doing R4R, if you are interested please fill out the form in my IG bio!
Instagram: @annawepisode

I’d love some feedback (help!). I’ve been writing on the android app and am just switching to computer so trying to get the hang of things!

General story feedback and any other tips greatly appreciated if you have time to read my story… (also, how do you get more readers???).

Thanks in advance…
Gem x

Title : Alpha King
Author : Gemma Sizer
Genre : fantasy

I’d love some feedback (help!). I’ve been writing on the android app and am just switching to computer so trying to get the hang of things!

General story feedback and any other tips greatly appreciated if you have time to read my story… (also, how do you get more readers???).

Thanks in advance…
Gem x

Title : Alpha King
Author : Gemma Sizer
Genre : fantasy

U can try mine if u wish.
It’s called " Black Hearts, Golden Desires"

  • Story Description: Nand,a princess of Solataria,is trained to protect her family and kingdom. What will happen if an old enemy arises for revenge?Will Nand be able to handle the storm coming her way?
  • Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5019562149478400

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