Title : Life in Demby Author : Megz_episode Description : The new students arrive in the university of Demby to start their new life. What will happen when the mysterious Author try to draw them into his sick, twisted GAME? Cover :
Episodes So far 10 Style INK Genre : drama Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5842077707730944
Hello I would really like you to review my story in all aspects if it’s possible and you can PM me your review. I would be really happy to see what you think about my story
Tysm for the review I truly appreciate it! I will fix the errors right away! And Zeke and eve are siblings I think u thought to say that u shop kyro and eve since he’s the hybrid but anyways tysm and yes I am continuing! I hope you too will continue reading next update should be up soon! Once again tysm
Since English is not my first language I am trying my best in it. But ofc I can crct tiny little rroes ty for mentioning it.
Story Name: The Last Tale Author: lastsnowfall Genre: Fantasy Summary: What happens when the children of well-known fairytale characters are forced to join the same boarding school? (LIMELIGHT, CC, LGBTQ+!) Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5079534392639488 Cover:
Review option:What would you like me to review? Writing, directing, writing + directing, OR no review at all (you just want your story view count up…)
Yes, I’d love to have a review! The writing and directing
Would you like me to PM you the review or reply to you here?: PM!
Thank you so much for this thread; having done reviews myself, I know the time and effort that reviewing takes and I appreciate the opportunity to get feedback on a story I am writing.
Story Name: Secrets Author: SarcasticGenie Genre: Mystery (Sorry if Mystery isn’t what you normally watch - there is some drama/romance/fantasy involved as well, but it is primarily a murder mystery.) Summary: When there is a murder at your college, you decide to try to get to the bottom of the mystery gaining an eye witness the police don’t have: the victim. (CC) Choices matter! Cover:
Review option:What would you like me to review? Writing, directing, writing + directing, OR no review at all (you just want your story view count up…)
Writing and directing would be useful because I know that when I started this story my coding wasn’t the best and it has improved since. Also, if you had any general feedback that would also be welcomed as I’m currently writing Season 2 of Secrets and would like an idea of any aspects that you liked/disliked so I know what kind of stuff I should/shouldn’t feature in it. Would you like me to PM you the review or reply to you here?:
PM please!
Thank you once again! Have a good day and stay safe!
Story Name: The unEXpected show Author: Jade Genre: romance Summary: you go on a vacation with 5 singles (it is a reality show), but you can get eliminated and there are new members almost every day (they are not just random entries though…) 5LI, LGBTQ options Cover: is it problem if I don’t have it here to upload?
I would like a review mainly on plot and writing since I know already that my directing is bad!
Thanks for this post, it’s amazing!
Story Name: Pathway to Reality
Author: Victoriaecs
Genre: Horror
Summary: You are a college student with an interesting quality. You and your friends defy what is unknown and decide to answer. Can you endure attacks of evil and fight it back?
Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6633320245690368
Cover art:
Hi! Would love to get a review from u
Tittle: Agent 66: Born to Kill (CC)
Author: xoRoséxo
Style: Limelight
Genre: Action
Chapters: 8
Description: Agent 66 is an infamous assassin. But when a mission gone wrong, 66 kidnaps Sasha - his possible witness, and sets to discovers the truth before it’s too late.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4722588854321152
Instagram: xoroses.episode
Story Name: Gold Leaf High Author: MTB Genre: Drama Summary: G.L.H. is a private school for the prestigious and rich. Meet and follow our characters as they start their third year of High School. Love/Family/Friendship Cover:
Story Name: Magicka: The Shaper of Destiny Author: Julianne on Episode, @episodejulianne on Instagram. Genre: Fantasy Summary: Iris is a Shaper - a messenger of destiny sent to Earth by the Fates. She’s never questioned her role before… Until she meets Thalia, a human with some unusual gifts.
Review option: Writing and directing, but I especially want some feedback on my directing! My writing is definitely stronger than my directing so I sometimes feel insecure about my directing skills I’d love to know what you think about them!
Would you like me to PM you the review or reply to you here?: You can post it here
Story Name: Breaking boundaries Author: Faith Rose Genre: Drama Summary: Noelle, a cheerleader is passionate about football.
She wants to show all the boys that girls have the ability to play football.
Will Noelle be able to break the boundaries? Cover: It’s unpublished
Review option:What would you like me to review? Writing, directing, writing + directing, OR no review at all (you just want your story view count up…) writing and directing the overall plot
Would you like me to PM you the review or reply to you here?: on here
MAGICKA: CHOSEN and my IG is @ellen.c.episode and in forum is @EllenC
Description: "You live a fancy life until your dreams become part of your reality. Can you handle being chosen to be Queen of Amethyst land or will you fail?"
Hello Licorice! I’ve just completed all five episodes of your story!
What I enjoyed:
I lo-oved your directing! I never read action stories on Episode, but I like yours and I could tell you spent time a lot of time on your story with the writing, directing, etc!
The timed choices were on-point. Like, you placed the choices and timed the choices at the moments where it made sense, and I felt they were the right difficulty for the story.
Music choices? It sounds like you adjust the volume before transitioning to a different song. I should do that, lol.
The character profiles at the end is super cool
Criticism:
Please note: My criticism is based on my own opinions, whether or not you agree with them is entirely up to you. If you disagree, that’s fine. I hope you choose not to be offended. If you are, my sincerest apologies.
Directing:
There is one small bug, or maybe it was intentional?
MAGICKA: CHOSEN and my IG is 
and PM’d them to you.
It sounds like you adjust the volume before transitioning to a different song. I should do that, lol.
