Story Reviews of the first chapter

[GoddessANA]

Hi guys I want to review your first chapters and covers so just share them

[TamiRose]

Have at it boo

Deadly Secrets

A vampire loves her. Her best friend’s a Werewolf. Her parents? Magically royal. Only one thing. Delilah doesn’t even know. Her world, is not as she knows. Will she accept fate?

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Deadly Secrets (Re-Vamped)

Lost Summer Love

Crazy love. Wacky friends. Unnecessary drama. How will Evan and Sierra make it through this crazy thing called, life

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Lost Summer Love

[Hijiko]

Hi! Sure why not

DEADLY TRIAL

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Genre: Thriller mostly
Description: Kate wakes up in a nightmarish place… little does she know she is not alone. A deadly trial awaits her and the six other suspects. Who’s guilty?

THE WRONG MATCH

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Genre: Romance & Comedy
Description: Married at first sight, uh? Seemed like a good idea until Maya found out that the perfect match she was supposed to be with turned out to be everything but what she dreamed of.

[Ray_Edwin]

I have three stories… pick one or pick them all! lol. TY or the reviews!

Fantasy/LL/Full directing/ CC- yes/ 4 chapters published (more coming)

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Storm Shield: Destiny Discovery

Sci-Fi/LL/SL/CC-no/Heavy Narration/ 5 ch published (more coming)

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Soul Slave

Fantasy/LL/SL/CC-no/Heavy Narration/ 9 chapters published (1-2 more coming, then complete)

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: My Kalona

[Roy]

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime
Instagram : roy_episode
Style: Ink
Chapters: 7 and ongoing
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5108744574074880

[aprilish]

Hi, thank you for making this thread!
I’d love if you’d give my story a shot! Here are the details:

Title: Sidereal
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Limelight
Blurb: An unlikely turn of events brings Dahlia from outer space to outside Felix’s window. Join them on their star-crossed journey as they cherish the wonders of being worlds apart.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5063859204587520

The covers~

Thank you so much!

[elawayne]

Hi! Thank you for this thread!
Title: Beyond My Reality
Description: Tired of her wild behavior, Ella’s mother sends her into a parallel world in which she’ll discover magic, lust and LOVE
Author: Manuela M.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5039292318875648

[JannahJackson]

Hi I would like a review thank you!!!

Story Title: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Story Description:
New Description:
Tales of the Old Asians warned that WW2 scars still plagued the exotic-cursed tribe in the mythical land at East South East Asia. The land of Sun, light & black magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you survive, solve the havoc, cleanse and heal, save and free everyone? Or die in vain?

Old Description:
Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? FullCC/MiniGames/Tappables
Genre: Realistic-Fantasy/Mystery/ Adventure/Thriller/Horror
Style: Multiple
How many chapters does it has: 6/7
Cover (With symbolic meanings of the cover inside the story)

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288
Additional Info:

1. Chapters are generally slightly longer than most episode stories…given because of the nature of the plot.

[Sydney_H]

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[episodeans]

Can you do mine?
Title: Going Back Home
Author/Instagram: Scarlet B (@scarlet.writes)
Genre: Drama/Adventure
Summary: Anna decides to give Wintervale a shot. After all, this was the place where their parents met. But when her sister was framed for a crime she didn’t commit, what will she do?
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 4 (ongoing)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6508859730558976
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[nellyy.epi]

Thank you for this! Here’s my story
Name : Right Beside you
Plot : After a traumatizing event, Nadine’s health turned upside down. Can she recuperate after visiting an Eating Recovery Center? It’s up to you. [CC/LL/POINTSYSTEM/CHOICE MATTER]
Episodes : 3
Status : On going
Gerne : Drama & Romance
Style : Limelight
CC : Available
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5251847875788800
More about my story : My story contains advanced directing and a point system . There will be 3-4 artscenes as well. I’m also using new backgrounds , instead of the ones on episode’s Art Catalogue.
My IG : nellyy.epi

Story Cover [Made by me] :

[MayLaugh]

Hey there, I would love to get to know your opinion

My details:
My Story:
Author: May Laugh
Title: Trouble Twins
Instagram: maylaugh_episode
Genre: Adventure
Episodes : 11 (going on)
Style: Ink
Description:
Always standing up for each other through thick and thin, that’s what these twins are about. Will they master to face the intrigues, the chaos and mysteries together? Trouble ahead.
Link: [http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5334870588784640 ]

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Large COVER:

[Matina_Kat]

If you can read it, you will help me so much