Story reviews *open!*

Hey, guys. I’m open to review your stories. I have a format that I think is fitting to rate your stories based on my review. I would personally love to review the Magicka contest stories, but any other story is fine, too.
Please, no hard feelings if your review isn’t favorable.
I will review your story in the most honest and helpful way possible.

Minor parts:
Story description: 5/5 at most.
Episode length: 5/5 at most.
Story cover: 5/5 at most.
Sound: 5/5 at most.

Main parts:
Plot score: 10/10 at most.
Directing: 10/10 at most.
Grammar: 10/10 at most.
Character Development: 10/10 at most.
Diversity: 10/10 at most.
Choices: 10/10 at most.


I’d love for you to review my story!

Title - beautiful broken lies
Author - Hannah & Carly
Description - elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
Link -

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This is my story hope you will enjoy, id love a rewiew

Title: Magicka: Ethereal
Genre: Fantasy
love interest: only one. not up for discussion.
Art scenes: Yes Optinal to watch
CC: Full.
Choices: yes
Mini-games: YES YES YES!!!
Grammar: amazing thanks to @MissHaze
Description: walking back to college from work you find an unconscious man, while waiting for an ambulance a magic creature hides in your backpack, but other people are looking for that creature too. people who are not human but something more magical. but are you trusting the right people.

link :



Hi! I have three stories, obviously I don’t expect you to read all three lol since you prefer Magicka, I have that linked first. I’ll put my other two in drop downs :slight_smile:

Title Magicka: Within Her Soul
Author KylieJay
Genre Fantasy w/ action, adventure, drama
Features Full CC, overlays, some choices matter, LL style, 3 episodes with more coming soon.
Just when she’s reached her breaking point, Lucy stumbles across a world on the brink of war and everyone expects her to save them. Can she restore peace on Charkana and within herself?

Romance Island

Kelsey would do anything to find love…including going on a dating show to meet 7 different men! But is everyone else there for the right reasons?
Author KylieJay
Genre Romance w/ drama, comedy
Features Classic, 20 complete episodes, multiple endings

My Secret Profession

Raelynn’s life spirals when a tragic accident leaves her and her brother orphans. Little does she know that the accident was planned because of a 30 year old grudge…and she’s next.
Author KylieJay
Genre Drama w/ mystery, romance, action
Features Ink, 9 ep - complete at 10, multiple endings, advanced directing

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Hi I’ve got a magicka story.
I’m open to any recommendations!

I’d love to have a review :two_hearts:
My story:
Title: Under the Stars
Author: Aykay
Genre: romance
Description: One day Jasmine decided to start a new life in the big city. But it seemed that fate isn’t good to her. Her only ray of hope: Ian Veira, a city boy through and through…

Hi, I would love an honest review on my new story.

Author: Jewels

Title: The Enchantments

Genre: Fantasy

Episodes: 5 (For now)

Description: A witch is shunned from her coven for not marrying the warlock her parents arranged for her, after that she seeks a new life and true love. (CC)

Style: Limelight

Link :


Hello! I would really appreciate it if you reviewed my story!! :heart:

Here’s my story info:
NAME: Beans Bixby: Private Eye
GENRE: Comedy
DESCRIPTION: When crime occurs in Glimmerton, it’s up to Beans Bixby to save the day. That is, unless, the cops are called.
# OF EPISODES: 3 (ongoing)

Thank you so much, it means a lot!! :slight_smile:
(PS, character development may not be high because it’s just a silly little story!!)

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My score finna be low😂 but I’ll give it a try

Check it out:
Btw the first chapter directing is not that improved.

Can I have a review?

Title: Dance Party
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Drama
Description: Akira Arakaki has been a professional dancer for several years, but a few subpar dance performances make him lose confidence in his talent. Can he restore his confidence?

Thank you for doing this :blush:
I’d love for you to review my story!
So here is my story:
Author: AnjitaD
Title: Magicka : Master of elements
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3(more coming soon)
Description: Will you and your friends able to save the world from darkness as you uncover secrets back 500 years ago ? ( MC: F, time choices points system, adventure, fantasy, mystery and action )
Style: Limelight
Link :

Story review for Beans Bixby: Private Eye

Minor parts:
Story description: 4/5. Personally, I believe that the story has potential after only reading its description. It seems quite intriguing and engaging, and I think you, as author, have written an interesting description that catches the readers’ eyes. If there were something negative to comment on, it would have to be the shortness. Nonetheless, a well-written description.

Episode length: 4/5. Very good! You seem to add the necessary scenes and an acceptable length to each chapter. None of which are inconsistent, and they all seem to have the same length. Very well done!

Story cover: 3.5/5. You seem to use Episode avatars in the cover as well as the addition of some overlays. This is of course an acceptable cover, but there is nothing much to point out. I think the colors that you have chosen fit the mystique of the story. Well done!

Sound: 4/5. Again, the sound and musical use in the story is top-notch. You seem to have a grip on when to use the sounds. They are a nice addition to the reader’s engagement. Some sounds are overused throughout the story, but I think you manage to use as many as you can at whichever fitting scene.

Main parts:

Plot score: 3/10. I understand your idea behind the story’s plot, but it just seems a little silly to me. If that is your idea, then great. I have nothing against the fact that you enjoy writing in the comedy genre/field and I must admit that some scenes were humorous. However, this story just exists and it does not feel like the story is moving at all. This results in lacking of character development, which in return ruins the story engagement for the reader. I think the comedy in your story is GOLD sometimes, but again, silly.

Directing: Irrelevant, or hard to rule out. This will not affect your score.

Grammar: 6.5/10. The reason as to why I subtracted two points is that you chose to use a simplistic form of language. Now, this is very acceptable, but it may not always be a positive note. Other than that, there were some errors. You write; “So today, I got this request that they lost an orange at this here bus stop-“. This should be corrected to; “So today I got this request that they lost an orange at this bus stop”.

Character Development: Hard to rule out. This will not affect your score.

Diversity: 6.5/10. You have added some diversity to your story with the addition of people with different ethnical backgrounds. You have failed to inform the reader, which ethnicity the characters originate from and it makes the reader doubt if they are of another country.

Choices: 0/10.
Total score: 31,5/60.
Star rating based on the review: :star: :star:3/4 out of :star: :star: :star: :star: :star:

Hey dear! I would love for you ti review my story if u wanted to! That’s my story deets.

Story Name: Necromancers
Genre: Fantasy
This story is about two siblings who are born as necromancers. Necromancers are people dealing with the dead by using magic. They fight demons and other evil creature so as to maintain peace in the world. They have a life of training but everything starts to turn upside down right after their mother’s death. Unknown things become known. Evil creatures are starting to take over. It’s up to them to handle it this time and they dont know if they are ready for it. Yet they too have personal lives since they are being hunted down by someone and they are in hiding. The one mistake in their past does this all. Will they be able to figure it out and fight the storm that’s coming towards them. Read to find out.

Instagram: @epi.enchantress

Hey!! I would love a honest review from you :heart_eyes:
Title: the last breath
Author: ladies.episode
Genre: Drama
Chapters: 7 (on going)
Descreption: Sibel became a doctor as she dreamed of, but will she leave or continue her career after she was forced to marry a cruel Italian mafia.
IG: @ladies.episode

Can you review mine?

Thank you for the honest review and feedback… much appreciated. Hope you enjoyed!! :heart:

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title: Pregnant by the bad pregnant robot(?)

description: Love , laughter and drama collide in this wacky adventure with little life lessons along the way. Will the ships survive? Or will you fail to take the crazy? (the plot is memes)

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