Story reviews! READ BEFORE REQUESTING YOUR STORY!

Hello! I’m Dalilah and I love proof reading so if you need a proof reader I’m here to help! I have other threads like this but I got lost in requests so now that I brought the unlimited passes on episode I’m happy to read! PLEASE BE PATIENT <3
DO NOT REQUEST IF YOURE SENSITIVE TO THE TRUTH!!

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Could you maybe read mine please
Title Secrets

Author Your._.girl. _.kay

Chapters Three more coming soon!

Genre Drama/Romance

Style Limelight

Description Kaylee Smith is a goody two shoes that doesn’t trust most.What happens when she finds out most of her life was a lie and everyone she trusted was keeping secrets from her?

Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4833837780762624

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Reading right now!

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EPISODE 1:
Coding/Directing is kind of off.
Good story line.
The characters were all over the place.
Later on in the story-
Everything is just everywhere so this may be your first story.
Onto Chapter 2
EPISODE 2:
Directing got better.
Story line still kind of off topic.
Onto chapter 3
CHAPTER 3:
Directing got even better!
Love how you try to give so much detail!
ADVICE

  1. Get a proof reader
  2. use zooms
  3. use overlays
  4. have a person help you when it code it if its difficult
  5. stay on topic
    THINGS YOU SHOULD FIX
    start using the “&” symbol instead of the “@” symbol
    spot directing
    stop using dull episode backgrounds!
    stop typing boxes in speech bubbles type fewer sentences.
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Thank you so much! Question how was my storyline off topic so I can remember for my next episode? (also this is my first story)

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You can review/proofread mine too.
If u want.

Title- Breaking Boundaries

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Description- Noelle, a cheerleader who’s passionate about football, wants to prove that football isn’t just for the boys.
Will she be able to break the boundaries?

Link-http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4671208766111744

IG- @faithxprincessx

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Thanks for the thread! Here’s mine :heart_decoration:

Title: Treasure In You
Author: L.Q. Walter
Instagram: @lqwalter.episode
Genre: Adventure/Romance
Chapters: 5 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
Description: After discovering an old diary she believes will lead her to the location of a long lost treasure, she teams with an unlikely ally: a guy who is downright cocky yet wickedly hot!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5342141547216896

Hey! I’d love for you to review mine :sparkling_heart:

Title Queer; Camp Heimat
Author Phoenix_Hope
Current chapters 4, more coming
(Id love for you to review all four, but if you can’t 3 is fine)
Style Limelight, cinematic
Genera Drama
Description Your parents send you to a LGBT conversion camp over the summer to “fix” you, but is the camp really all it seems? Drama, discrimination, and self-discovery add up to the longest summer of your life…
Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6215484515221504
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Hello @DalilahEpi! Thanks for reviewing our stories! I would love to hear what you think of my story! It has 4 episodes so far! :butterfly:


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Sorry for the late response school has me stressed! But in the beginning you were saying this is how she came from nerd to a baddie but the title is also called secrets. Later on in the story you speak about them hiding something from her. So I don’t know if it’s either about secrets or how she became a baddie.

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Reviewing now!

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My story is called Melody of Your Heartbeat!

It’s really a mix of both if that makes sense she basically learns the huge secret then changes which are both big parts of the story

I’d like a review please : D!
Molly's Card 2 BT

I just recently published and I’d love to hear some opinions : ))

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Thanks for offering this huge help, lovely.
Here’s my story

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Hi :sunflower: :yellow_heart: Thanks so much for making this! I would love a review/feedback on mine.

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Title: Reveal: Unkissable
Author: MK
Description: A series of unfortunate events that all started with one exceptionally bad hair day. | CC, LL |
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4964985146114048
ig: @mk_words_unwritten

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Thank you for the thread!! Could you review my story please? :heart::heart:

Title: Imperfectly Perfect
Author: Michelle Rose
Story Description: Isabella is starting her first year in college. All of her life everything has fallen perfectly into place. What will happen when things don’t go as planned? CC
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 4 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram: @episode.michellerose
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5692980893777920

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Are you going to read it for the proof reading or for review? :thinking:
But thanks for the thread :hugs:
Hope you like my story
Title- Memory Lost
Author- Tessa
Style- LL
Genre- Drama
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6255861402107904
Ig- tessa.epii

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EPISODE 1:
Love the story line!
Directing is not bad!
Loving the overlays!
Details matter and you gave so many details.
onto chapter 2
CHAPTER 2:
Good length.
Some directing is off.
Loving the feeling of 2 MC’s
Some spelling is off.
CHAPTER 3:
Some spelling is off.
Love seeing other characters point of views.
Directing got better this chapter.
Spelling mistakes got better.
Love the ending!
ADVICE
Use the “&” symbol instead of the “@” symbol it messes up your fading transitions.
Make sure you check your story and revise your spelling.
Other than that I am totally binge-reading your story.
THINGS YOU SHOULD FIX
Your episodes are about 20 minutes long maybe shorten then 5 minutes less.

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I’m reading it however you request it love!

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