hehe thankyou :sweat_smile: I am a clumsy af :pleading_face:

Oh no! It’s totally fine you were just confused maybe. Please keep in note that there is a line and it will take a while for me to get to you depending on the other authors stories!

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Reading now!

yeps…I know…take your time :hugs:

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okay thank you so much, I’m go back and make those changes :pleading_face::yellow_heart::yellow_heart: I appreciate you’re review.

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Hey! Thank you for doing this!

Title: Scandalicious
Author: Niwrites
Description: You have always lived your life the righteous way. What would you do if you are the face of a scandal doing the very thing you hated?
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight

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Hey thanks for this thread so can yoy read mine too? And if yes then i’ll like a personal feedback :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Here’s my story
TITLE : It’s Impenetrable
AUTHOR : Khushboo
GENRE :Drama
DESCRIPTION :Amelia has been running away from her past, but what happens when it follows her and destroys her happiness? Will she be able to sustain it or will it consume her? (CC, 2LI)

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Lovely directing, some mistakes here and there.
Love how we get to see the point of view of both characters.
It’s a really good length!
Awesome first episode truly love!
Love how you gave a choice to see the recap or not.
Once again amazing directing.
Love the ending suspense.
This chapter also gives an explanation to the story line!
DETAILS, DETAILS, DETAILS! The important thing to me in stories is details and you gave a ton of that each episode!
Fabulous directing!
This one was a tad bit shorter than the others but left me in suspense!
Nothing, this story is absolutely fantastic!

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Aww ghurl, you’re gonna make my heart melt away :blob_hearts: I’ll look into Chapter 1 and fix the issues. Thank you so much for the lovely feedback!

There isn’t really a HUGE directing mistake just when he was driving ya know I saw the legs lol. I pay attention to little things when reviewing!

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Hello! I have two stories, maybe you like to check out one or both? :slight_smile:

This is my second story:

Story Name: The Last Tale
Author: lastsnowfall
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: What happens when the children of well-known fairytale characters are forced to join the same boarding school? (LIMELIGHT, CC, LGBTQ+!)

This is my first one:

Title: Maybe We’re Home
Author: lastsnowfall
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance
Description: When life treats Althea unfairly, she decides to become her own hero in this story - and gets unexpected help. (LIMELIGHT + CC!)
Episodes: 17
Link: 3

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Ah I got it, will definitely fix that scene. Thank you so much! I appreciate it :blush:

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Thanks for this thread, I would love to get my story proofreaded
I have released my new story and it’s not like any other ordinary mafia story. It’s emotional , gut wrenching , and a perfect combination of suspense and romance. Hope you read mine

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**Is This Me? **
You can review mine if you like!
Chapters 1-4 Hope you enjoy it!!

2 Stories: Is This Me? (M) Is This Me? (F)

With a dark past, it’s hard to look forward to a bright future. But I can’t live in the past anymore. I need to know who I am. What I am. I need to know Is This Me?

No CC, Some sound/music

You can also follow me on Instagram @Deedee.Writes

Is This Me? (F) LINK & COVER

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Is This Me? (F)

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

Is This Me? (M) LINK & COVER

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Is This Me? (M)

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

:heart: :orange_heart: :yellow_heart: :green_heart: :blue_heart: :purple_heart: :brown_heart: :black_heart: :white_heart:

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Moved to Share Feedback since this is for story reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :smiley:

hey there, thanks for this thread! i just published this 3 weeks ago, & it’s my first story! i would love a review from you! <3

STORY TITLE: how to feel
AUTHOR: viarose
GENRE: fantasy, romance, drama
STYLE: Limelight
INSTAGRAM: @viarose.writes

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Great directing for an first story.
Love the story line!
Lovely grammar and spelling!
Some of the emotions exaggerates the dialogue. Which is good! It really expresses their feelings!
Pretty lengthy episode.
Loving the details.
Still decent directing.
I enjoy the humor.
To me this episode was shorter than the other one so I really liked the length of this episode.
Very good episode.
You explained the whole camp idea well here.
I liked the way you state all of these different types of genders and sexuality’s!
Way better than health class lol.
The warning in the chapter is great glad you did that!
Good length not too long and not too short.
I really don’t have any but go back and look at your story so you can see the glitches and all that jazz.
Just the glitches.

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Ah I see, well maybe take one step at a time because it’s kind of confusing.

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Got it thanks!

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Hey there!! Thank you for reviewing :heartpulse:

Title: “The Art of Criminal Profiling”

Genre: Mystery

Chapters: 4 released, more to come!

Style: Limelight

Description: “Can Valentina, a successful FBI agent, decode a series of bone chilling mysteries before it’s too late? If not, she may just lose everything and everyone she cares about.”


  • Limited for the MC (skin color cannot be changed)
  • Full CC for both love interests

This story uses multiple point systems and all choices matter!!

Mini Games:
Mini games are used throughout the story

Sound and music:
Sound and music are both used.

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The Art of Criminal Profiling