Story Reviews 📚



Free Story Reviews For You!

I’m doing free story reviews for the time being, so please tell me:

Is it published yet?

If yes

Do you want me to put my review in the fanmail section?

If no

Provide a link to your story please!

Tell me what type of review you want!
1- Honest, critical, answer.
2- Does the cover go with the story
3- Would I read it if you didn’t ask me to.
4- All of the above

Waiting List


New authors that need a cover come here: A’s Art Shop
I will get story reviews done quickly. Thanks, and I hope you order!

~Angelina :art:


Hi! Thanks for the thread and for your time :blush:
I’d like to get some feedback, here are my story details!

Title: Game Of Disguises

Author: Bonnie Dundee

Desc: Two best friends have fun by disguising themselves as other people and attend luxurious and fancy events, but what happens when they find themselves in the wrong place and at the wrong time?


Yes, it is already published, and you can choose wherever you want to write it, for me it’s absolute the same.

B) The type of review I’d prefer is number 4 :slight_smile:


Title: Out of the…box?!
You aren’t a superhero, nor have magical powers! Just a wrong wish of your’s , causes Fate of whole human race to be in your’s hands!!! Will you Succeed or face defeat?? (2 ends)

Is it published?
Yes , , put review where ever you want

4. all above
Thanks :blush:


Title: Sirena
Author: RosieLove
Desc: Sirena has a lot of choices to make and along the way you’ll meet: Aaron-the sweet human boy, Dante-the bad boy fairy King, and Rey-the high class fairy prince!

Is it published yet? Yes! I just published it tonight!

If yes
Do you want me to put my review in the fanmail section? Yes, that would be great!

Tell me what type of review you want!
4- All of the above

Thank you so much!!


Hi! Thank for creating this thread! I`d love to get a review!
A)Story title: Let the demon inside

Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5
B) 4


Title: Hale Huna
Author: Anonymous Author
Desc: Kendall’s dad decides to move her and her brothers to Hawaii. She soon discovers she has the key to a world beyond her imagination…and secrets about who her mother really is…
Cover: cover
Published: Yes, but not finished.

All of the above, please! Thanks!


Hello @AngelinaTheUnicorn I would like to receive a review, please. :blush:

:grin: Type of review: 4 - All of the above. :grin:
:thinking: Can I receive my review through PM? :thinking:

Story title: Rewinded life.

Author name: Lia Lopez.

What would you do if a galactic being gives you the power to go back and change situations that escapes from your hands?

Genre: Comedy, romance, life.

Episodes: 6 (Ongoing - Working on chapter 7.)



Hi there…

Title: Inseperable destiny

Author: Khush_Ved

Desc: A love story which has been incomplete for ages. Will you find your love of your past life?
Keep reading to discover more love and drama.

Is it published yet: Yes, but not finished yet.

Thank you so much for providing this help.



Thank you for starting this thread! I would love a review
Here’s my story:
Title: The Essentia Chronicles
Author: Tldax
Description: When a powerful young couple steals the Kings most prized possession, it starts a chain reaction that will either destroy their world or return it to its former glory.
Link: HTTP://

Yes, it’s published.

4 all of the above

Thank you! I’m looking forward to your review.
Have a great day! :blush:


@TLdax913 @Khush_Ved @LiaLopez @AnonymousAuthor1 @Jojo.episode464 Your requests will be done when I get home, which should be in 5 hrs or so!


Thank you!


Mistaken Identity
Siobhan is ecstatic when she finds her real family. But then she finds out it’s a case of mistaken identity. Now she has to find them again and the girl she was mistaken for.

Not published.


Thanks! :smile:


Thank you @AngelinaTheUnicorn :sunny:


No problem, hope you enjoy it, any idea when it’ll be ready?


Hey! I’ve created 2 stories so far, and I would love it if you’d check 'em out!!


Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

Small Cover:

Large Cover:


The Ember Moon Pack

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings

Genre: Fantasy


Small Cover:

Large Cover:

Both are published, PM me the review (don’t post in fanmail please!).

Type of review for both: #4, all.


Thank you so much


Name: The Pregnancy Curse
Author: Dr.Smile
**Description:**Being the bad boy always seems like fun and games, but for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. Too bad Tristan Stuart realized this way too late. [Male MC]

It’s published, PM me the review (not in my fan mail), and I’d like a number 4. Oh and thank you. :slight_smile:


Thx just saw this. You’ll have to pm since its not published


Title: The Nation D: Moon Eyes
Author: P Marroquín
Genre: Dystopian / mystery
Description: You run away from one place to another… Where’s your new destination? And what dark secrets does it hide? Will you finally find answers to your past?
It is published, and I prefer the review through forums

I would like a honest review and if you would read it if I didn’t ask you to.