Storyline advice

Hey all
I’m working on an episode but I a question
for eg if a girl get lost and they will look for her
can one episode only goes about that part where and how they will look for her?
Will it not be boring for the readers??
Anyone, help

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Maybe you could vary the perspective, so you see short scenes from the lost girl and how she is feeling? Make sure to not reveal where she is tho, since it will ruin the suspende behind them looking for her.

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Thnks.
So the whole chapter can go about looking for her right??

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I think so, as long as you make the writing interesting and vary the scenes :revolving_hearts::relaxed:

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goo… thanks for the advise

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Yeah, the whole chapter could be about looking for her as long as long as you make it interesting!

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Thank you

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I think if you make it interactive (include choices where reader chooses where to search) then they definitely won’t find it boring

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