Stuck on story. Please help?


#1

i Was writing the longest paragraph ever and then it hit me on what to do. So I’m just going to make a poll on my story. I have an overlay already in review, which may take a couple of days. I’m almost done with the first chapter, and I still have to do the 2nd and third. Would anyone wanna ready my story? It’s a lot of comedy, mixed with romance and a pinch of drama! :wink:


#2

Hello, my name is Stephanie and I’m the author of “Facing My Demons”. I’d like to read your story! I’m also just writing mine so it’s been complicated as I barely know how to position characters. Lol! But if you read mine in return and gave me a feedback on how I could improve I would really appreciate it! I’ll read yours right now!! :stuck_out_tongue::stuck_out_tongue:


#3

Hey, Im LunqrWolf. Im working on a story called “Hidden In Us”. If you post your story or give me a link I will gladly read it! :slight_smile:


#5

Ok I’ll send the link. The main issue I’m having is I’m having trouble starting the conversation between her and her friend. They haven’t seen eachother in a while, they see eachother maybe every 2 months or so, because they don’t live near eachother, but I don’t want thins to be awkward between them, like it is portrayed in the story. Can you help me try to fix this? I’ll send the link now btw.


#6

Ok this is the link
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#7

Ok, I’ll read yours and give feedback.


#8

Thank you!! Dont read chapter 7 as I made a mistake and released it without the chapter being finished.


#9

What’s the name of your story by the way??


#10

Give me your story tittle because that link is sending me to the app store and it’s no taking me directly to the story


#11

That link doesn’t work for some reason, what’s the name of your story?
We don’t have to negotiate for a R4R, I’d gladly read it :slight_smile:


#14

Thank you! It seems to be an issue with it, it’s not showing up when I put in the title, so I’ll file a request ticket and hopefully they’ll fix the issue. Thanks everyone though for the support!


#16

Would you mind giving me the name of your story :D?


#17

It doesn’t show up in the search bar. But if you search up my username epi.ms, click on it you should see my story. Only read the first chapter, the other 2 are blank I don’t want you to waste any passes.


#18

The title is Playing Pregnant, but it doesn’t show up.


#19

I found the story but it is not complited therefore we aren’t able to read anything. Just the note from the author. :woman_shrugging:t3:


#20

Oh ok thank you. I’ll fix the problem.


#21

Let me know when it’s fixed.