I think the bold brackets are the ones you were missing.
choice
“Casual Hottie”{
@YOU walks to screen center
@YOU changes into YOU_Crop_Top_Fall
YOU
Hmmm…
choice
“Yes!” {
gain YOU_Crop_Top_Fall
} “No…” {
goto choosing_outfit
}}
}“Semi Fancy”{
@YOU walks to screen center
@YOU changes into YOU_SEMI_FANCY
YOU
Hmmm…
choice
“Yes!” {
gain YOU_SEMI_FANCY
} “No…” {
goto choosing_outfit
}}
}“Sweatpant Queen”{
(^ is line 1265. This short text being written is not in the script and is to be used for reference.)
@YOU walks to screen center
@YOU changes into Casual
YOU
Hmmm…
choice
“Yes!” {
gain Casual
} “No…” {
goto choosing_outfit
}}
@pause for a beat