Thank you so much, you saved me an awkward scene
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Writing my first story and I’m doing my first remembering choices scene, it keeps telling me there’s an error, “Choices must follow dialogue immediately, not a branch”
I’ve checked it over and over and I’m not seeing where I went wrong with this? Help?
If you’re using if/elif coding you don’t need a word choice beforehand, but please post your script 
Yes? 
pls help me I don’t know what I did wrong
BELLA
Anyway I'll get ready
@follow BELLA to screen center in zone 1
@BELLA walks to screen right in zone 3
@BELLA changes into BELLA_towel
@BELLA walks to screen right in zone 1
label choosing_outfit
BELLA (think)
(What am I going to wear today?)
choice
“Not even tying”{
@BELLA walks to screen center in zone 3
@BELLA changes into BELLA_not even trying
}
“To much for school”{
@BELLA walks to screen center in zone 3
@BELLA changes into BELLA_hot
}
“This is ok for school”{
@BELLA walks to screen center in zone 3
@BELLA changes into BELLA_this is ok for school
}
@BELLA walks to screen center in zone 1
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
BELLA (talk_contend)
Do I want this or not?
choice
“choose this outfit”{
@BELLA(talk_handsonhips)
Well i guess it is ok
I need to go before mom kills me i’m already late
}
“I hate this”{
goto choosing_outfit
}
@BELLA exits left
check your thread, I answered there 
You need a space between BELLA and animation
BELLA (talk_handsonhips)
no
BELLA(talk_handsonhips)
thanks a lot you’re a lifesaver
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I’m doing a dressing scene with gains, the thing is, it has choices within choices, so i ask the reader if they want the outfit, where i use the gain. the problem? it doesn’t show all the options at once if you press option 1, it say " i want this one" and “i dont like this” then it says “outfit 2” i want it to say all the outfits at once. I dont know if you get what im saying; heres my script
Avater Customization #{
label outfit_choice
ANNA (idle)
(Which one should I choose)
choice
“Outfit 1”{
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@zoom on 173 0 to 381% in 0
@ANNA changes into ANNA_casual
@zoom on 173 389 to 381% in 5
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 3
@pause for a beat
ANNA (idle_jawdrop)
(I'm going to need to keep this longer than expected)
ANNA
(Do I like this one?)
choice
“Gurll, this outfit rocks”{
ANNA (admire)
It's definitely this one
gain ANNA_casual
}
“It’s not my style”{
ANNA (talk_shrug)
Ehhhh...
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@ANNA changes into ANNA_default
goto outfit_choice
}
“Outfit 2”{
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@zoom on 173 0 to 381% in 0
@ANNA changes into ANNA_professional
@zoom on 173 389 to 381% in 5
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 3
@pause for a beat
ANNA (idle_jawdrop)
(Where did she get this)
ANNA
(Do I like this one?)
choice
“Gurll, this outfit rocks”{
ANNA (admire)
It's definitely this one
gain ANNA_professional
}
“It’s not my style”{
ANNA (talk_shrug)
Ehhhh...
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@ANNA changes into ANNA_default
goto outfit_choice
}
“Outfit 3”{
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@zoom on 173 0 to 381% in 0
@ANNA changes into ANNA_cozy
@zoom on 173 389 to 381% in 5
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 3
@pause for a beat
ANNA (idle_jawdrop)
(I have never looked this good)
ANNA
(Do I like this one?)
choice
“Gurll, this outfit rocks”{
ANNA (admire)
It's definitely this one
gain ANNA_cozy
}
“It’s not my style”{
ANNA (talk_shrug)
Ehhhh...
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@ANNA changes into ANNA_default
goto outfit_choice
}
It also says on line 932 (the line where it says outfit 3) that theres a { that does not have a matching
i hope it isnt too confusing
You forgot a few brackets
label outfit_choice
ANNA (idle)
(Which one should I choose)
choice
“Outfit 1”{
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@zoom on 173 0 to 381% in 0
@ANNA changes into ANNA_casual
@zoom on 173 389 to 381% in 5
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 3
@pause for a beat
ANNA (idle_jawdrop)
(I’m going to need to keep this longer than expected)
ANNA
(Do I like this one?)
choice
“Gurll, this outfit rocks”{
ANNA (admire)
It’s definitely this one
gain ANNA_casual
}
“It’s not my style”{
ANNA (talk_shrug)
Ehhhh…
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@ANNA changes into ANNA_default
goto outfit_choice
}
}
“Outfit 2”{
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@zoom on 173 0 to 381% in 0
@ANNA changes into ANNA_professional
@zoom on 173 389 to 381% in 5
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 3
@pause for a beat
ANNA (idle_jawdrop)
(Where did she get this)
ANNA
(Do I like this one?)
choice
“Gurll, this outfit rocks”{
ANNA (admire)
It’s definitely this one
gain ANNA_professional
}
“It’s not my style”{
ANNA (talk_shrug)
Ehhhh…
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@ANNA changes into ANNA_default
goto outfit_choice
}
}
“Outfit 3”{
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@zoom on 173 0 to 381% in 0
@ANNA changes into ANNA_cozy
@zoom on 173 389 to 381% in 5
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 3
@pause for a beat
ANNA (idle_jawdrop)
(I have never looked this good)
ANNA
(Do I like this one?)
choice
“Gurll, this outfit rocks”{
ANNA (admire)
It’s definitely this one
gain ANNA_cozy
}
“It’s not my style”{
ANNA (talk_shrug)
Ehhhh…
@ANNA is dustoff_loop
@ANNA changes into ANNA_default
goto outfit_choice
}
}
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OMG thank you, its my first time making choices within choices and doing gains, so i was really confused
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Check my linktree, I have a dressing game templates there 
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thank you, i’ll totally check it out
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