A reviewer read my story. She has pointed out this error where the episode plays to a certain point then you get use a limited cc on a character. Which right after that scene it returns to the every beginning of the episode. I added a goto and another label to fix the issue since it appeared in almost all of the episodes with cc. I updated the story so that she could read the fixed episodes but she just told me a few days ago that the episode is doing it again. Though when I checked it; it’s only showing the background twice now then moves on to the next scene.
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I’m still not sure I can visualise it. 
- A limited CC on a character? Do you mean that the CC template is broken somehow, or is limited CC just part of your story?
- When it repeats, is it a “smooth” sort of return, as if there was an unintended label in there, or does the episode crash roughly?
- Do all reviewers experience this issue in the same way?
- Do you have any ideas as to why it would return to the beginning of the episode specifically? (ie. is there a goto somewhere that leads to the beginning of the episode that the reader might be running into?)
Basically, I’m trying to figure out whether that’s more like an actual glitch in the app that’s out of your control, or just a coding error.
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I added a limited cc template made by Dara.Amarie. no one has pointed out this issue other than the reviewer that is reading it now. I do have a return goto that goes to the beginning but it doesn’t pop up until the very end of the episode. It’s nowhere near the scene that is causing the problems. It’s kind of smooth. It acts like it’s changing scenes and then flashes the same background again for a few seconds the goes into the next episode.
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Should I send you the link so that you can see what is happening?
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Hm… still odd that only one reviewer has seen it or pointed it out…
So there’s a goto near the end that brings someone to the beginning, is there any chance that the cc template is taking the reader to the end, then?
Sure, you can send me the link, I’ll see if I can reproduce it. 
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You can send me the link as well 
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Okay I have a question, it’s about timed choices.
If the reader fails to choose within the time limit, how do you code it so that it will go to a different branch?
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(Correct me if I’m wrong)
Afaik, if the reader fails to choose in time, the choice will go with the last option. So the last option would have to lead to the failure branch. That’s why a lot of scenes have something like “1. Kick, 2. Punch, 3. Hesitate”.
Ah, thank you!
That would explain why it immediately chose the last option when I purposely let the time run out.
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Here is the link. The issue is in episode 2.
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WolfGamerGirl37, for episode 1, when I clicked on the hairstyles “Suburban Bubble” “High Ponytail” “Short Curly Hair” it lead me to another page of the template. Perhaps have a look at your gotos there?
I’m on ep 2 atm
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I have a guess as to what it is.
During Rina’s CC, I noticed this:
Lena pops up in there. Any cc option that I hit affects Lena.
Then I saw what you were talking about, that loop back to the beginning.
What I think is happening is that you copied and pasted Lena’s CC template to where Rina’s is, and a few things stayed the same, including the label.
I’d be able to show you exactly where it is if I saw your cc template, but the one intended for Lena probably says something like:
< Premium>”I look amazing!”{
goto end_lena_cc
And the CC template for Rina has the exact same goto, leading the reader back to the end of Lena’s cc.
So I figure you’d have to tweak that second CC template; make sure it has Rina’s name instead of Lena’s, and make sure it has a different exit goto from what Lena’s template has. Let us know if you need any help with that part. 
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Yep, I’m getting the same results
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Thank you! I can take a screenshot of my script and send it to you. I will check that goto label again. I don’t even see her popping up on mine like that.
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Okay, so I just copied and pasted the template from the script down below. This is the cc template for Rina.
Template
RINA (think)
I should change my hair.
label hair_lip_1
NARRATOR
What do you want to change?
choice
“Lipstick” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Hairstyle” {
goto hairstyles
} “I look amazing!” {
goto hair_lip_1_end
}
label lipstick_1
NARRATOR
Lip colors.
choice
“Natural Colors” {
goto lip_natural
} “Bright Colors” {
goto lip_bright
} “Dark Colors” {
goto lip_dark
} “Done” {
goto hair_lip
}
label lip_natural_1
NARRATOR
Natural lip colors.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Blush” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Blush
goto lip_natural_1
} “Dune” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Dune
goto lip_natural_1
} “Ivory” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Ivory
goto lip_natural_1
} “Sand” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Sand
goto lip_natural_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to RINA
@RINA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Mocha” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Mocha
goto lip_natural_1
} “Taupe” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Taupe
goto lip_natural_1
} “Terracotta” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Terracotta
goto lip_natural_1
} “Toffee” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Toffee
goto lip_natural_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to RINA
@RINA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Umber” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Umber
goto lip_natural_1
} “Rosewood” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Rosewood
goto lip_natural_1
} “Dark” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Dark
goto lip_natural_1
} “Sable” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Sable
goto lip_natural_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to RINA
@RINA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Crimson” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Crimson
goto lip_natural_1
} “Chestnut” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Chestnut
goto lip_natural_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to RINA
@RINA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
label lip_bright_1
NARRATOR
Bright lipstick colors.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Bubblegum Pink” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Bubblegum Pink
goto lip_bright_1
} “Champagne” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Champagne
goto lip_bright_1
} “Olive” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Olive
goto lip_bright_1
} “Cherry Red” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
goto lip_bright_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to RINA
@RINA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Orange Crush” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Orange Crush
goto lip_bright_1
} “Raspberry” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Raspberry
goto lip_bright_1
} “Rose” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Rose
goto lip_bright_1
} “Ruby Red” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Ruby Red
goto lip_bright_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to RINA
@RINA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Seafoam” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Seafoam
goto lip_bright_1
} “Sky Blue” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Sky Blue
goto lip_bright_1
} “White” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into White
goto lip_bright_1
} “Lavender” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Lavender
goto lip_bright_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to RINA
@RINA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
label lip_dark_1
NARRATOR
Dark lipstick colors.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Azure” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Azure
goto lip_dark_1
} “Raven” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Raven
goto lip_dark_1
} “Bordeaux” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto lip_dark_1
} “Dusty Rose” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Dusty Rose
goto lip_dark_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to RINA
@RINA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Plum” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Plum
goto lip_dark_1
} “Emerald” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Emerald
goto lip_dark_1
} “Scarlet” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Scarlet
goto lip_dark_1
} “Wine” {
@RINA changes mouthColor into Wine
goto lip_dark_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to RINA
@RINA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
label hairstyles_1
NARRATOR
Hair styles.
choice
“Short Hair”{
goto hair_short_1
}“Mid-length Hair”{
goto hair_medium_1
}“Long Hair”{
goto hair_long_1
}“Curled Hair”{
goto hair_curled_1
}“Tied-Up Hair”{
goto hair_updo_1
}“Done”{
goto hair_lip_1
}
label hair_short_1
NARRATOR
Short hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Buzzed Hair” {
@RINA changes hair into Buzzed Hair
goto hair_short_1
}“Classy Pixie” {
@RINA changes hair into Classy Pixie
goto hair_short_1
}“Messy Pixie” {
@RINA changes hair into Messy Pixie
goto hair_short_1
}“Pixie” {
@RINA changes hair into Pixie
goto hair_short_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Unstyled Faux Hawk” {
@RINA changes hair into Unstyled Faux Hawk
goto hair_short_1
} “Slicked Back” {
@RINA changes hair into Long Slicked Back Hair
goto hair_short_1
}“Twist Hair” {
@RINA changes hair into Twist Hair
goto hair_short_1
}“Long Faux Hawk” {
@RINA changes hair into Long Faux Hawk
goto hair_short_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Cornrow Faux Hawk” {
@RINA changes hair into Cornrow Faux Hawk
goto hair_short_1
}“Shaved Sides” {
@RINA changes hair into Shaved Sides
goto hair_short_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
label hair_medium_1
NARRATOR
Medium hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Bed head” {
@RINA changes hair into Shaggy Long Hair
goto hair_medium_1
}“Classic Bob” {
@RINA changes hair into Classic Bob
goto hair_medium_1
}“Dreadlocks” {
@RINA changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
goto hair_medium_1
}“Straight Bob” {
@RINA changes hair into Straight Bob
goto hair_medium_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Suburban Bubble” {
@RINA changes hair into Suburban Bubble
goto hair_medium_1
}“Natural Curls” {
@RINA changes hair into Natural Curls
goto hair_medium_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
label hair_long_1
NARRATOR
Long hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Layered Hair” {
@RINA changes hair into Layered Hair
goto hair_long_1
}“Long Feathered” {
@RINA changes hair into Long Feathered
goto hair_long_1
}“Jules Hair” {
@RINA changes hair into Jules Hair
goto hair_long_1
}“Long Straight Bangs” {
@RINA changes hair into Long Straight Hair
goto hair_long_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Straight” {
@RINA changes hair into Straight
goto hair_long_1
}“Styled Corn Rows” {
@RINA changes hair into Styled Corn Rows
goto hair_long_1
}“Beach Wave” {
@RINA changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto hair_long_1
}“Head Scarf”{
@RINA changes hair into Side Head Scarf
goto hair_long_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Long Braids” {
@RINA changes hair into Long Braids
goto hair_long_1
}“Box Braids”{
@RINA changes hair into Black and Brown Box Braid Updo
goto hair_long_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
label hair_curled_1
NARRATOR
Curled hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Diva Curls” {
@RINA changes hair into Diva Curls
goto hair_curled_1
}“Long Curly Hair” {
@RINA changes hair into Long Curly Hair
goto hair_curled_1
}“Rebel Half Shaved” {
@RINA changes hair into Rebel Half Shaved Hairstyle
goto hair_curled_1
}“Short Curly Hair” {
@RINA changes hair into Short Curly Hair
goto hair_curled_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
label hair_updo_1
NARRATOR
Updo hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Casual Braided Pigtails” {
@RINA changes hair into Casual Braided Pigtails
goto hair_updo_1
}“High Ponytail” {
@RINA changes hair into High Ponytail
goto hair_updo_1
}“Fishtail Braid” {
@RINA changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto hair_updo_1
}“Messy Back Bun” {
@RINA changes hair into Messy Back Bun
goto hair_updo_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Double Bun” {
@RINA changes hair into Double Bun Updo
goto hair_updo_1
}“Braided Crown” {
@RINA changes hair into Braid Crown Updo
goto hair_updo_1
} “Punk Ponytail” {
@RINA changes hair into Urban Punk Ponytail
goto hair_updo_1
}“Dancer Bun”{
@RINA changes hair into Dancer Bun
goto hair_updo_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
“Pulled Back”{
@RINA changes hair into Monday Morning Updo
goto hair_updo_1
}“Cornrow Bun”{
@RINA changes hair into Cornrow Bun
goto hair_updo_1
}“Ponytail Locks”{
@RINA changes hair into Ponytail Locks
goto hair_updo_1
}“Short Tied Up”{
@RINA changes hair into Short Tiedup Hair
goto hair_updo_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles_1
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to RINA
@RINA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from RINA
@RINA starts idle
goto hair_lip_1
}
label hair_lip_1_end
NARRATOR
Is this the look you're going for?
choice
“Yes! I look perfect!” {
readerMessage Template created by @dara.amarie.ep on IG!
&RINA is primp_condescend
goto end_cc_template
} “No, let me change something” {
goto hair_lip
}
label end_cc_template
This is Lena’s template in the script as well.
Template
label hair_lip
NARRATOR
What do you want to change?
choice
“Lipstick” {
goto lipstick
} “Hairstyle” {
goto hairstyles
} “I look amazing!” {
goto hair_lip_end
}
label lipstick
NARRATOR
Lip colors.
choice
“Natural Colors” {
goto lip_natural
} “Bright Colors” {
goto lip_bright
} “Dark Colors” {
goto lip_dark
} “Done” {
goto hair_lip
}
label lip_natural
NARRATOR
Natural lip colors.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Blush” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Blush
goto lip_natural
} “Dune” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Dune
goto lip_natural
} “Ivory” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Ivory
goto lip_natural
} “Sand” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Sand
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to LENA
@LENA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Mocha” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Mocha
goto lip_natural
} “Taupe” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Taupe
goto lip_natural
} “Terracotta” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Terracotta
goto lip_natural
} “Toffee” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Toffee
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to LENA
@LENA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Umber” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Umber
goto lip_natural
} “Rosewood” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Rosewood
goto lip_natural
} “Dark” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Dark
goto lip_natural
} “Sable” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Sable
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to LENA
@LENA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Crimson” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Crimson
goto lip_natural
} “Chestnut” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Chestnut
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to LENA
@LENA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
label lip_bright
NARRATOR
Bright lipstick colors.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Bubblegum Pink” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Bubblegum Pink
goto lip_bright
} “Champagne” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Champagne
goto lip_bright
} “Olive” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Olive
goto lip_bright
} “Cherry Red” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
goto lip_bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to LENA
@LENA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Orange Crush” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Orange Crush
goto lip_bright
} “Raspberry” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Raspberry
goto lip_bright
} “Rose” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Rose
goto lip_bright
} “Ruby Red” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Ruby Red
goto lip_bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to LENA
@LENA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Seafoam” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Seafoam
goto lip_bright
} “Sky Blue” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Sky Blue
goto lip_bright
} “White” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into White
goto lip_bright
} “Lavender” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Lavender
goto lip_bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to LENA
@LENA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
label lip_dark
NARRATOR
Dark lipstick colors.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Azure” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Azure
goto lip_dark
} “Raven” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Raven
goto lip_dark
} “Bordeaux” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto lip_dark
} “Dusty Rose” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Dusty Rose
goto lip_dark
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to LENA
@LENA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Plum” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Plum
goto lip_dark
} “Emerald” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Emerald
goto lip_dark
} “Scarlet” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Scarlet
goto lip_dark
} “Wine” {
@LENA changes mouthColor into Wine
goto lip_dark
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to LENA
@LENA is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
label hairstyles
NARRATOR
Hair styles.
choice
“Short Hair”{
goto hair_short
}“Mid-length Hair”{
goto hair_medium
}“Long Hair”{
goto hair_long
}“Curled Hair”{
goto hair_curled
}“Tied-Up Hair”{
goto hair_updo
}“Done”{
goto hair_lip
}
label hair_short
NARRATOR
Short hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Buzzed Hair” {
@LENA changes hair into Buzzed Hair
goto hair_short
}“Classy Pixie” {
@LENA changes hair into Classy Pixie
goto hair_short
}“Messy Pixie” {
@LENA changes hair into Messy Pixie
goto hair_short
}“Pixie” {
@LENA changes hair into Pixie
goto hair_short
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Unstyled Faux Hawk” {
@LENA changes hair into Unstyled Faux Hawk
goto hair_short
} “Slicked Back” {
@LENA changes hair into Long Slicked Back Hair
goto hair_short
}“Twist Hair” {
@LENA changes hair into Twist Hair
goto hair_short
}“Long Faux Hawk” {
@LENA changes hair into Long Faux Hawk
goto hair_short
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Cornrow Faux Hawk” {
@LENA changes hair into Cornrow Faux Hawk
goto hair_short
}“Shaved Sides” {
@LENA changes hair into Shaved Sides
goto hair_short
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
label hair_medium
NARRATOR
Medium hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Bed head” {
@LENA changes hair into Shaggy Long Hair
goto hair_medium
}“Classic Bob” {
@LENA changes hair into Classic Bob
goto hair_medium
}“Dreadlocks” {
@LENA changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
goto hair_medium
}“Straight Bob” {
@LENA changes hair into Straight Bob
goto hair_medium
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Suburban Bubble” {
@LENA changes hair into Suburban Bubble
goto hair_medium
}“Natural Curls” {
@LENA changes hair into Natural Curls
goto hair_medium
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
label hair_long
NARRATOR
Long hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Layered Hair” {
@LENA changes hair into Layered Hair
goto hair_long
}“Long Feathered” {
@LENA changes hair into Long Feathered
goto hair_long
}“Jules Hair” {
@LENA changes hair into Jules Hair
goto hair_long
}“Long Straight Bangs” {
@LENA changes hair into Long Straight Hair
goto hair_long
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Straight” {
@LENA changes hair into Straight
goto hair_long
}“Styled Corn Rows” {
@LENA changes hair into Styled Corn Rows
goto hair_long
}“Beach Wave” {
@LENA changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto hair_long
}“Head Scarf”{
@LENA changes hair into Side Head Scarf
goto hair_long
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Long Braids” {
@LENA changes hair into Long Braids
goto hair_long
}“Box Braids”{
@LENA changes hair into Black and Brown Box Braid Updo
goto hair_long
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
label hair_curled
NARRATOR
Curled hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Diva Curls” {
@LENA changes hair into Diva Curls
goto hair_curled
}“Long Curly Hair” {
@LENA changes hair into Long Curly Hair
goto hair_curled
}“Rebel Half Shaved” {
@LENA changes hair into Rebel Half Shaved Hairstyle
goto hair_curled
}“Short Curly Hair” {
@LENA changes hair into Short Curly Hair
goto hair_curled
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
label hair_updo
NARRATOR
Updo hair styles.
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Casual Braided Pigtails” {
@LENA changes hair into Casual Braided Pigtails
goto hair_updo
}“High Ponytail” {
@LENA changes hair into High Ponytail
goto hair_updo
}“Fishtail Braid” {
@LENA changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto hair_updo
}“Messy Back Bun” {
@LENA changes hair into Messy Back Bun
goto hair_updo
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Double Bun” {
@LENA changes hair into Double Bun Updo
goto hair_updo
}“Braided Crown” {
@LENA changes hair into Braid Crown Updo
goto hair_updo
} “Punk Ponytail” {
@LENA changes hair into Urban Punk Ponytail
goto hair_updo
}“Dancer Bun”{
@LENA changes hair into Dancer Bun
goto hair_updo
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Pulled Back”{
@LENA changes hair into Monday Morning Updo
goto hair_updo
}“Cornrow Bun”{
@LENA changes hair into Cornrow Bun
goto hair_updo
}“Ponytail Locks”{
@LENA changes hair into Ponytail Locks
goto hair_updo
}“Short Tied Up”{
@LENA changes hair into Short Tiedup Hair
goto hair_updo
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to LENA
@LENA is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LENA
@LENA starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
label hair_lip_end
NARRATOR
Is this the look you're going for?
choice
“Yes! I look perfect!” {
readerMessage Template created by @dara.amarie.ep on IG!
&LENA is primp_condescend
} “No, let me change something” {
goto hair_lip
}
OK I notice errors in Rina’s template right away. I don’t have access to a computer atm so I’ll do this from my phone, step by step:
RINA (think)
I should change my hair.
label hair_lip_1
NARRATOR
What do you want to change?
choice
“Lipstick” {
goto lipstick_1
} “Hairstyle” {
goto hairstyles_1
} “I look amazing!” {
goto hair_lip_1_end
}
label lipstick_1
NARRATOR
Lip colors.
2 Likes
choice
“Natural Colors” {
goto lip_natural_1
} “Bright Colors” {
goto lip_bright_1
} “Dark Colors” {
goto lip_dark_1
} “Done” {
goto hair_lip_1
}
label lip_natural_1
NARRATOR
Natural lip colors.
2 Likes
Thank you for catching the errors. I didn’t realize I messed up in the template.
label hair_lip_1_end
NARRATOR
Is this the look you’re going for?
choice
“Yes! I look perfect!” {
readerMessage Template created by @dara.amarie.ep on IG!
&RINA is primp_condescend
} “No, let me change something” {
goto hair_lip_1
}
#continue story
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