Hey, I would like to request a art scene
Skin- rose 04
Eyebrows- Arched Natural (black dark)
Hair- Long Loose Curls (Ash Blonde)
Eyes- Deepset Downturned (Hazel)
Nose- Defined Natural
Lips- Full Round Flat Top Skin(Plum Gloss)
Boots- Detention Boots
Dress- Green Patterned Party Dress
Transparent Gradient Black
Scar Nose Across 04-07
Floral Tattoos Ink Mulicolor
Shorts - Frayed Cutoff shorts denim grey black
Top- Base Ball Tee Tied Cotton Grey Black
Shoes- Flat Lace up sneakers Canvas Grey Black
Can it be drawn if you not I’m fine with it edit.
Background: any background is fine as long it’s not black background
Extra- There best friend so just let it be cute and funny. And fun
Okay thank you.
Can I request a review?!
ofc just fill out the form please
Password : the password is Sunflower
Instagram Handler : roy_episode
Story Title : Shado
Author Name : Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime
Genre : Action
Chapters : 9 and ongoing
Small Cover :
I’ll start on it as soon as I can
Thank you for requesting!
You forgot something @Roy <3
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I’m really sorry, I missed it because I was in a hurry. Not that I didn’t read the details.
It’s okay! Could you please add it in? <3
Thank you !!
Review complete! @Roy
Grammar & spelling
Spelling and grammar is superior! Although, there are some parts where you were lacking of commas. Such as “Noah, stay with me!” Be on a lookout for little things like that.
The plot is very unique! I must say, I’ve never read a story with a description like yours. It’s ultimately refreshing to read as well as enjoy.
I think you ran out of space to write more words, but the description is supposed to be like this:
“After tradegy, Roy returns to civilization as a changed woman… etc” Though, I can understand if you ran out of space due to the limit episode put. You really outdid yourself on the description for your story, Shado. Very creative (:
I find that Roy is very independent, and the vibe that she can handle being in tough situations. Which she can, just based off of the first episode. It’s clear that she’s had a hard past, which made her get into fighting (I assume) since she legitimately killed her abusive father.
Along with your description, your covers (both large and small) is very unique. I was wowed by the effects your covers had.
I would also advise you to be careful of spot directing. It can tend to get tricky here and there. I suggest you to review your 2nd chapter of Shado, where Noah passed away. One more thing that I enjoyed were the timed choices while Roy was fighting her opponent, along when Jaden was teaching Roy to better her fighting
Good luck on your story
lol her story perfect
I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you thank you thank you thank you so much. And yeah, I ran out of space for description
No worries! Me and episode have an on and off relationship when it comes to coding and the character limit! Glad you enjoyed my feedback (:
Bumpity bump (: