Super honest reviews/ grammar corrections

As the title says I am open to give writers reviews on their stories.
I am an avid reader, a typo catcher, and proper grammar specialist!

LIMELIGHT ONLY!

I personally hate reading ink because it doesn’t catch my attention as well…
If you want good, honest opinions about your story please DM me here, or on IG @mjx3___

HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU SOON!
Megs<3

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i would love a review if you dont mind! thanks so much!! :star_struck:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to…

Chapters: 6 (More to come)

Full CC, Choices Matter, Point System, Advanced Directing, 2 LI! :blush:

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Feedback is appreciated! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Title: Blurred Lines
Author: Ellie
Description: After an intense breakup, Quinn enters the world of no-strings-attached dating. But, what happens when it turns out there are strings after all, and she’s completely tangled in them?
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4833334534668288

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I’ve read your story before babe! I love it and desperately waiting for more! I love that you took my opinion on adding a bit for detail for that pizza date aurora had with her childhood crush.

I love how it’s so suspenseful. Gets down to peoples emotions.

All around so far it’s a great story and can not wait for you to publish more!

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It is officially on my list.

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omg you’re so right! bahaha i’m so sorry! :heart:

i just released episode 6 last night if you’re interested! :star_struck:

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No worries at all. I’m a huge fan so far!

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thank you :smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts: i hope you enjoy episode 6! :star_struck:

Hey love to read yours! im also new here :smiley:

You could read my story its called I Hate Love Stories
I love to hear your thoughts on it and I don’t mind if you DM me on my instagram @mahee._x

Story: I Hate Love Stories
Type: LimeLight
Genre: Romance, Mystery
Author: Mahee
Chapters: 4 (More coming soon)
Summary: This story is about a girl named Zinah and a guy named Zen, they start of as enemies (because for their families) but eventually love takes over! Will your love be strong enough to over come all obstacles that has to come?

:bangbang: LINK :bangbang:
:point_right:t4: Episode Writer Portal :point_left:t4:

:unlock: INSTAGRAM @mahee._x :unlock:

:bangbang: CUSTOMIZE YOUR OWN CHARACTER+DONT FORGET TO PUT YOU SOUND TO THE FULLEST AS YOU DONT WANNA BE MISSING ANY JUICY STUFF :bangbang:

:bangbang: I GIVE SHOUT OUTS TO STORIES I LOVE :bangbang:
:bangbang: DM ME ON @mahee._x :bangbang:
:bangbang: SCREENSHOT IT AND DM ME IT :bangbang:

Title: My Kalona
Genre: Fantasy
Style: LL (spotlight)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4559018983227392
Description: Naomi desperately tries to bond with her estranged father, but becomes the prisoner of a Native-American curse that threatens all. Will her choices lead to freedom or failure?
Notes: Chapter length will depend on your choices through-out the game (hidden scene unlocks, character gains or losses, etc…

Thank you for this thread!

TWINSASTER

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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4894493207232512
Summary: Things escalates quickly when your other twin successfully persuades you to move to Boston for college. Will they survive college on their own?
Genre: Drama
Episode: 4 (on going)

another review thread for you <33
@TLdax913

Hi!

I would love a review of my new story. Any and all feedback is welcome! :slight_smile:

Here is the info:

Title: Dark Essence
Description: When the darkness inside threatens to break free & destroy everything you hold dear… Will you seek comfort in the ones you love or allow your Dark Essence to take over? (Lim CC)
Episodes: 3
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6025752143069184

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Story Title: Reality
Author: Zoppola
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Description: Who does determine our world? Garito is an extraordinary creature in the Earth, and she knows the answer.
Will she help the humanity? Will you?
Genre: Fantasy
I honestly think it’s sucks, but I like the topics I talk about in it, so it stays. I’m looking forward to your honest opinion <3 It’s limelight

This is my first one so its not really perfect one, hope you enjoy it
And english is not my first language so the grammer is messy
Title -Love Pill
Episode author - Flo
Description - When he was lost in the world of pain, she came into his life and became his love pills
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4526048392052736
Genre - Romance
Style - Limelight
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Episodes - 4 episodes

I am really happy to share it with you. I hope you enjoy it. Thankyou

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