Spoilers for the revamp of my story, THE NEW GIRL
The revamp of my story starts with the MC packing up the last of her stuff, then goes downstairs to meet her friends. Then they go to the airport, where the mom and dad will go to find the boarding gate thingy, and leave the MC to say good-bye to the friends (they came with her to the airport). In the original version, the only friend who said good-bye was a girl named Haley (and she didn’t come to the airport either), but in the revamp I added another friend, her name is Gwen. I haven’t written the next part yet, but then the MC will fly to her new home and get settled and all that stuff. Then she finds out that her neighbor is a BAD BOY!!! Jk lmao. I’m thinking of dividing up the story in months. Like maybe episodes 3-6 will be the month of September (since she starts school), 7-10 could be October, and 11-14 could be November, and each of those months could have like a moral or something to teach the reader? Like those “Winnie Years” books, where each chapter is titled “May” and “June” and “July” and stuff. That’s all I have for for now lol