The point is realy the orgasm unfortunately - Its for bit long to explain it but its from the context of the story it is necessary that it is obviouse they talk about it and not just making love in general.
Because making love doesn’t necessarily mean she experienced it.
I was thinking about maybe soften it to use some other word for it bit of a joke (since their friends are a pretty funny duo).
CJ
So did he made you “blossom” or not?
KATE
Yes…
MELL
But that’s amazing!
MELL
Finally, you have for once had the right blossoming experience!
KATE
Actually, it was more than once…
MELL
What? Now I am officially jealous!