The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Unwanted Love

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#1

Hello please check up and read my new story…
This story about a girl that lost her confident to making love with boy…But then a new guy and a troublemakers come to her and try to open her heart again.

Feel free can comment too…I’m looking for your feed back. Thank you.


#2

I’m willing to read the first couple of episodes! I’ll give you some feedback soon.

If you like, you can check out mine too!
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4516208307732480


#3

Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy

Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 9 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5221523745800192

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#4

Hiya! I’ll do R4R?:smiley:
Title- Hidden Behind Lies…
Authors Name- Chy.Dillon
Genre- Action/Romance…
Description- What happens when your dad has a past and it finally catches up to you? Nothing is what it seems….

story link_ http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5630728767930368


#5

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This is my story:

Name: Coincidence or Destiny

Description:

Aurora loved her life, but during the summer she met a boy and her life starts to change completely

The meeting was coincidence or destiny?

Chapters: 7

Genre: Drama

Style: Ink

Instagram: kateb_episode

Link:


#6

I already read your story…Kinda impress me by your background and effect also the achievement,
I really stunning by your story. Good work.


#7

Thank you! I read your story and I have a couple of things you can do to improve!

With directing, you should probably use the & more often as sometimes I can see characters popping into scenes out of nowhere.
The narration was good, however I feel like the story was a bit fast-paced. You can try to let the reader find out some information by themselves as they read more of the story, rather than telling them who exactly everyone is.

I did enjoy your story though, keep it up :smiley: !


#8

Hello everyoneeeeeeeeee ! :slight_smile:

I just link my first episode story and I am very proud of it ! But I want to have some feedback about it !!

Name: One love at the time (Limelight)
Author: ALX
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Updates: 1-3 episodes a week
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance (slightly dramatic too.)
Summary: Lola is an ordinary girl, until she fell under the attraction of Caleb, the school’s bad boy. The problem: Caleb doesn’t want anyone at school to know about their relation. The other problem? Lola is also attract to Henry, her friend Sarah’s brother. Typical ? Well, not that much.
Warnings: Mature Themes and Strong Language
Notes: Character Customization available throughout the story

Choices DO NOT effect the main storyline. You’ll only have to make a choice by the end of the story.

Here’s the link to my story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5692969561751552 !