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I would appreciate it if you could take the time to review my story and give me some constructive feedback and advice on how I can improve… I’m a first timer.
Thanks x


Hey! My name is Dani! :black_heart:

If you want, I can review your story and post the review on my Instagram (daniepisodewriter).

The review will be focus on:

Language/Grammar (I can’t say much about grammar and language because English is not my first language, but if I spot any mistakes I’ll tell you.)
Overall opinion

:warning: The review will be as many episodes as you have read of my story. :warning:
Per example: If you read 3 episodes of my story, I’ll review the first 3 episodes of your story.
Maximum: 4 episodes

Here’s my story:
Title: Darkness
Author: Dani
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Style: Ink
Description: If you can’t get away from darkness, you learn to live with it… A vampire story with action, adventure, mystery and, of course, romance!
This is not a cliche vampire story!
Episodes: 6 (more to come)
Instagram: daniepisodewriter
I hope you like it :black_heart:
Any other person who wants a review can send me their story too! :blush::black_heart:

Tell me if you want me to do the review! :calling:


Hi thanks for replying back. Your story looks very intriguing and I will definitely give it a read… I have only finished part one, can I get back to you once I’ve completed at least three chapters?
Thanks again

Kax x


Yeah, of course! I’ll be waiting! :blush:


Thanks so much!


Btw I’ve followed you on Instagram.


Heya! I would love to do a read for read with you! Can you read my story? (Only 3 episodes) Then post a screenshot of you finishing and I’ll immedaitly start yours!
Here are my story details!

Title: H & V: Deadly Love
Author Name: Afra S.
Description: Adriana is preparing for her wedding unaware of her past which isn’t as normal as she thinks. After a meeting with her parents she discovers a secret which changes her life forever.
Chapters: 3 chapters (Ongoing)
Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Mystery (You will find it in the Fantasy section)
Style: Ink
Additional details: Includes character customization, LGBT love interests, Your choice matters.
Instagram: @episode_afra
Story Cover:
Story Link:


I’ll check it out, thanks for responding. I have only completed one episode of my story so can I get back to you when I have finished at least three episodes? I love your cover art and I look forward to giving it a read - One of my favourite genres is fantasy by the way!
Thanks again

Kax x


Aww Thanks!!


Hi Kax,
i’m also a first time writer here on Episode and just published my first story. Would you be interested in doing a read for read/ review for review? I can also send you screenshots proving that I actually read at least 3 chapters of your story :slight_smile:


I’d love to, great idea! I have almost finished the first episode of my story so can I get back to you once I’ve finished at least three? I appreciate your response. Thank you.


That works! Don’t rush your writing though! Take your time so your story can be the best it can be :wink:


Hey, can you please read my story?? :blush:

Title: Romantic Cruise
Author: Lawful Evil
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance, Drama
Episodes: 4 [Completed] 2 endings
Description: You break up with your cheating boyfriend and go on a cruise. What will happen if you meet a mysterious dangerous man? Customize Characters


Hey! I would REALLY appreciate it if you reviewed my story. (I’ve been trying to find reviewers :confused: :slight_smile:) The link is here:


Hey! My review requests are now closed …
But follow my Instagram (daniepisodewriter)! I’ll post when I open the requests.:wink:


Hey girl, I’d really appreciate it if you gave me some feedback on my story! I’d love to take a look at yours as well. I LOVE vampire stories. Mine is a princess/magic/fantasy story with some romance tossed in. Check it out if you have time, love!


Your story sounds great! I love those kind of stories! :heart_eyes:
Do you want to wait until my review requests requests are open or do you want me to read your story now and give a little feedback?


Closing due to inactivity :slight_smile: