The Critique Corner ❤ (Share, Promote and Read!)

Hey there, I’m April! In case you’re looking for an honest review, read for read, or just a way to promote your story, you’ve come to the right place. I’m in search of good stories, preferably by new authors, and I’d love to give them my feedback.

I’ll be reading all your stories and sending you my critique, regardless of whether it’s a read for read, or just a review.

So don’t hesitate- just share your story down below!

I’d also appreciate if you could read my story, since I’m a new author, too! Here are the details:

Title: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Romance/Fantasy
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode

Hoping to get a lot of new stories (and a couple of reads for mine, too! :joy:)

Thank you, and have a great day! :heart: :grin:


I’m new too!

Title: Cruelty of Ice
Author: Miranda Lynn
Genre: Drama
Blurb: Savannah is the new student at a swanky high school. What happens when she encounters an old enemy?


Thank you for sharing you story! I’ll definitely read it and give you my feedback. Hope you’ll read my story too! :slight_smile:

Sure! Thank you :blush:

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I would gladly do a r4r with whoever wants! I do reviews as well.

Title: sweet 16
Genre: romance,action
Style: INK
Author: Christine D.

Whoever wants, feel free to text me :blush:

Hi, April!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, it will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story:

Sure, I’ll give your story a read. Here is Mine:

Title: Agents of SPECTRUM
Author: Andrew (Drew) Jones
Genre: Adventure
Chapters: 4 with more on the way
Description: When a young lady is recruited by a government agency, her life will change forever.
Instagram: andrewjones.episodes

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Hi, there! Can you give me a review and feedback on my story?

Here’s my story!
Title: I’m Just Me
Style: Ink (No CC)
Episodes: 7 (ongoing)
Author: Sarahthebeaut
Insta: sarahthebeaut.epi
Description: Alice is your typical “rebel teenager”, but what happens when she goes through self-discovery while facing problems, secrets, and heartbreak?

Hey guys,
I’m new to making my own Episodes and I would love to get some readers’ opinions! In fact, I made a HUGE and hilarious mistake that led my characters to be naked in more than 3 Episodes! LOL.

Anyway, if you guys are new and need advice on how to make stories, go ahead and read mine and let me know if you want to know how I did anything! I’ll send you my coding.

Title: Forbidden Romance
Genre: Romance

Info: My story has 9 Episodes published and more to come soon! It is about a young innocent teenage girl who is extremely religious but finds herself slowly accepting the fact that she is a lesbian after meeting the girl of her dreams.
She runs into problems with her friends and family and goes through a lot of fun and exciting changes!




I’m up for a r4r and I provide screenshots
Title:The Heart Won’t Let Up
Episodes:6 (ongoing)
Description:Heavenly has been let down her whole life and although she would love to give and receive love, her heart just won’t let up will Ace change that or will it all crumble before them?

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Hey @ChristineHZ, I’d love to read your story! So, do you want to do a read for read, perhaps?

Hey there, @Alex_Af! Wow, your story sounds really interesting! Can’t wait to read it! I’ll get started right away, and give you my feedback. Hope you’d be interested in reading mine, too!

Hey @Drew216, still can’t thank you enough for your feedback! I can’t wait to read your story!

Hey @Saramona, hahaha it’s alright; it happens all the time when you’re new! I’d love to read your story nonetheless, and give you my feedback. I’m new here too, so I hope you’ll read mine as well!

Hey @Aqaurius-kiss, I’d love to do a r4r with you! I’ll get started on your story right away!

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We would love to check out your story!

Please check out ours!

It is our first story!

Title: Swipe Right or Die Trying
Author: handaepisode
Genre: Romance
Description: Harper takes to tinder in an effort to find love but will it end in life long happiness end in tragedy. Who will you choose? Customized Character
Number of Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Instagram: @handaepisode
Twitter: @handaepisode
Facebook: @handaepisode

Hey @Handaepisode, that sounds perfect! I’ll go right ahead and read your story! Silhouettes is my first story as well, so I hope you’ll read it, too!

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I will check it out right now! I’m working on finishing up episode 4 for our story and it will be published within the next few hours/tomorrow!

Thank you so much it means a lot!

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Ok I’m going to check yours out now

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Currently improving my story thus I would greatly appreciate a review. Of course in return I’ll do the same, thanks :blush:
Name: Art of Desire
Author: Joqueena
Genre: comedy
Summary: A love for art but a stronger desire for each other. Will they be able to quench their thirst or will mishaps break them
Instagram: Joqueena_stories (feel free to follow me)
Questions: Is the plot interesting?
Are the directives good?
Are the characters explained properly
Is the genre more comical or romance?
Is the story understandable? Is it okay that the MC is a male rather than a female?

Art of Desire

Hey @joqueena, sounds great! I’ll be right on my way to read your story, and give my critique! I hope you’ll read mine too! Thank you!

Name- Retaliation
Author- Saka Moshood Abiodun
Genre- Thriller, Political drama, Revenge, Revenge play, drama, heavy drama, suspense
Summary- Rose’s simple life was destroyed by a political family. In a thirst of revenge, she takes the identity of a successful business woman named Kim Brown. Now Rose plans on flipping the tables on those who destroyed her.
One quote from Rose- “I will strip them of everything they love, money, love life, family. Everything I lost”
Style- Ink
Published- Yes

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Episodes- 3 (more to come)
The story is well explained!
I am not narrating what happened to Rose! It is well scripted and directed!
Please check it out and leave a message.

Hey @youngblackboy, your story looks great! Would you be interested in a read for read?