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*A New Story :D

Hey, this is my first story The Race Of Life I had an idea about 15 years old for a movie but I can not just go to the company and make a movie So I found Episod even though there is no fa horizontal screen, I hope you enjoy it Because I do not know it seems to me boring with someone who will read without knowing what the rest of the story is And I’m sure it’s interesting that’s only the first 5 episodes I thought about writing everything and then Raise it but ן finally decidin…