What an amazing grammar. I’ve never seen anything like this in my entire eyesight!
Hero is myfavorite out of all. She’s super confident about herself. I just don’t like that she’s like ah I feel so different than everybody.
Just AMAZING literally. Even I wouldn’t have come up with this. Your an excellent Author. You have everything planned right there. Plus you’ve got all the scenes ready for all your stories.
WHAT I THINK 100/100
Wow you’ve made me the most happiest person in my neighborhood. Plus where is the mother. You should do a flashback about that. Plus you’ve got everything right there, it’s just really amazing and impressive. You put a lot of effort into it. If I’m missing anything please tell me.