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#21

I would like to review your story as well. Will PM you about it :slight_smile:


#22

This is my story:

Name: Coincidence or Destiny

Description:

Aurora loved her life, but during the summer she met a boy and her life starts to change completely

The meeting was coincidence or destiny?

Chapters: 12

Genre: Drama

Style: Ink

Instagram: kateb_episode

Link:

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#23

Thanks you!!
Take your time, I don’t mind waiting.:grin:


#24

GRAMMAR 8/10
Now the grammar is okay. Your grammar is a little bit dudish. For example

My example: I know, right? It’s not like I high-fived her in the face!

Your example: “I know, it’s not like I high-fived her in the face.”

Plus I love your periods, and punctuations, commas.

PLOT 10/10
I love your plot! It’s like you planned it out before you created it. The characters, personalities. It’s amazing, literally. Stunning.

EPISODES 7/10
Fantastic! The only problem is on episode one in the flashback

Flashback: When they were at the club. Shon was kinda still sitting there. But he got up. Other than that I like it!

WHAT I THINK 99/100
It’s totally amazing. I love your story hoping for the next episode! Plus your characters are funny.


#25

Your next. I’ll only be reading 3 episodes for preview.


#26

Thank you!! I’ll work on the grammar part of it. I’m glad you enjoyed it, and I have episode 4 in the works!


#27

That’s great!:heart:


#28

Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?
Chapters: 7
Genre: drama
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5874052041146368