I would like to review your story as well. Will PM you about it
This is my story:
Name: Coincidence or Destiny
Aurora loved her life, but during the summer she met a boy and her life starts to change completely
The meeting was coincidence or destiny?
Take your time, I don’t mind waiting.
Now the grammar is okay. Your grammar is a little bit dudish. For example
My example: I know, right? It’s not like I high-fived her in the face!
Your example: “I know, it’s not like I high-fived her in the face.”
Plus I love your periods, and punctuations, commas.
I love your plot! It’s like you planned it out before you created it. The characters, personalities. It’s amazing, literally. Stunning.
Fantastic! The only problem is on episode one in the flashback
Flashback: When they were at the club. Shon was kinda still sitting there. But he got up. Other than that I like it!
WHAT I THINK 99/100
It’s totally amazing. I love your story hoping for the next episode! Plus your characters are funny.
Your next. I’ll only be reading 3 episodes for preview.
Thank you!! I’ll work on the grammar part of it. I’m glad you enjoyed it, and I have episode 4 in the works!
Title: Teacher or Queen?
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?