@Elemental REVIEW COMPLETED
• To sum up this review THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!! I love to read fantasy stories but I love them even MORE when the author is creative and shows how creative they can be!!
• The coding for this story is absolutely amazing! I’ve never seen the things you’ve done in your story, done in another story! I won’t add any spoilers for people who may want to read but your scene planning and directing was absolutely amazing!! Kudos to you babe 
• Love stories with customization! Makes me feel like I’m actually part of the story and makes me want to keep reading!!
• The use of overlays and backgrounds just adds to the creativity of this story and makes it stand out so much more! The one I’m most particularly fond of is the symbol that the MC has been seeing all over! That was absolutely amazing!! 
• Having parts in the story where the reader can make the choice and it ACTUALLY MATTERS was phenomenal!!
• To piggy back off of the last point, the scene where the reader had to type in their guess as to where they thought they were until they got it right??? TOO AMAZING FOR MY BRAIN 
This was one of the best parts to me!!
• Love the depth of the characters! They all have their own stories that make you want to know more about them!
• I like the narration throughout the story! Some of it is author narration and some is MC narration! I love how it brings the entire story together!
•Your transitions were smooth and steady and really kept the story together! Amazing work love
• The episodes were a tinsy bit shorter than I would have written but when you have such good content it makes up for the shortness! Just try to give your readers a little more before ending the episode!
• There was only ONE coding error that I saw when I was reading and I’ll attach it below and scratch out the dialogue as to not give spoilers! Overlays are a bit tricky to code so just make sure that they look good on your end or see if there’s a glitch in that overlay!
PLEASE KEEP WRITING
Lol, that’s my suggestion! I absolutely love this story and will be adding it to my personal read list so I can continue to read until you’re finished writing! I love this story so much and I cannot wait to see where you take it! DO NOT get discouraged by the amount of reads you have so far!! Most people tend to like cliche stories and that’s why they end up with the most reads but YOUR STORY is going to draw readers in because of it’s uniqueness and it’s amazing content! Again, I am super excited to see where you take this story!! Amazing work babe!
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