The name of my character it changes!

I have this problem. When the reader click the choice the name of my character changes it in the name of that choice that you click
And continue like this in all the story !
HEEEEELP.

is this your story? can you post a picture of your script?

} “Let’s get to know this man better” {

@zoom on 522 0 to 135% in 0

readerMessage Bonus scene!

readerMessage +1 CARLOS / +1 MARIA

@CARLOS +1

@MARIA +1

@KIARA starts deepbreath

@pause for 2.3

@MARIA starts admire_happy

    KIARA (talk_agree_happy)

Okey.

can you show me the entire scene

here

C

Cami Episode

C

Cami Episode

a Anneke.bellen@telenet.be
hace 2 horas

Detalles

INT. VOLUME

music music_poppunk

volume music 50 3000

@zoom reset

@speechbubble reset

@transition fade in black in 2

readerMessage Cover & Splashes creation by @zoekzoef_episode

@pause for 3.0

@transition fade out black in 2

INT. LENGUAJE

@transition fade in black in 2

@pause for 3.0

@transition fade out black in 2

INT. VOLUME MY

@zoom on 237 0 to 322% in 0

@transition fade in black in 2

    NARRATOR

Choice matters, choose carefully


    NARRATOR

Tap slowly, advanced zooms.

@pause for 1.0

volume music 0 3000

    NARRATOR

Chapter 11

@pause for 2.0

@transition fade out black in 2

INT. CUARTO 2 DIA

music ext_beach_quiet

volume music 20 100

@KIARA changes into Kiara ropa interior campera

@KIARA spot 0.695 -32 340 in zone 3

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

@pan to zone 3 in 0.0

@zoom on 865 192 to 174% in 0

@transition fade in black in 2

@pause for 3.5

@KIARA starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_awaken

@pause for 2.0

@KIARA spot 0.695 -32 340 in zone 3

@KIARA faces left

@KIARA starts idle_lay_exhausted_loop

@speechbubble is 145 100 to 100% with tail_top_left

    KIARA

(Where the fuck am I?)

@pause for 2.5

@zoom on 827 48 to 192% in 0

@KIARA spot 0.695 176 192

@KIARA starts standup_neutral

@pause for 2.3

@speechbubble reset

@KIARA starts stretch_pregnant_painful

@pause for 2.5

@speechbubble is 117 320 to 100%

    KIARA (talk_exhausted)

Ugh, I feel like shit.

@KIARA starts think_rubchin

@pause for 2.5

    KIARA

(What is that sound?)

@pause for 2.5

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@zoom on 320 304 to 192% in 0

@pause for 4.0

@pan to zone 3 in 0.0

@zoom on 827 48 to 192% in 0

@pause for 2.0

music off

@pause for 0.5

music music_danger

volume music 100 0

    KIARA (talk_confused_mindblown)

I'm on the beach?


    KIARA (talk_afraid)

And who undressed me?


    KIARA (tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear)

I must leave as soon as possible.

@pause for 2.5

@KIARA faces right

@pause for 2.5

@KIARA faces left

@KIARA starts dustoff_neutral_loop

@pause for 2.5

if (VESTIDO_SALIR is “Go out 1”) {

@KIARA changes into Kiara salir campera

} else {

@KIARA changes into Kiara salir campera 2

}

    KIARA

(I do not know who the jacket will be but I'll give it back later.)

@pause for 2.0

@KIARA walks to spot 0.695 5 192 in 3 AND KIARA starts walk_scared_loop

INT. COCINA ISLA DIA

@CARLOS changes into Hombre casual 8

@MARIA changes into Mujer joven 4

@zoom reset

@pan to zone 3 in 0.0

@pause for 2.0

@KIARA enters from right to screen center AND KIARA starts walk_scared_loop

@KIARA starts search_neutral

@pause for 2.5

&KIARA walks to spot 1.280 123 1 in zone 2 in 4 AND KIARA starts walk_scared_loop

@pan to zone 2 in 4.3

@KIARA starts react_startled_surprised

@EXTRA spot 0.665 134 170 in zone 3

@MARIA spot 0.665 134 170 in zone 3

@MARIA faces left

@speechbubble is 216 115 to 100% with tail_top_right

    EXTRA

Miss Kiara?

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA starts idle_awkward_scratch_loop

@pause for 3.0

@pan to zone 3 in 0.0

@remove EXTRA

@speechbubble is 144 118 to 100% with tail_top_right

    MARIA (talk_think_neutral)

Why are you here?

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@pause for 2.0

@KIARA starts think_rubchin

@pause for 3.0

music off

&zoom on 409 376 to 260% in 0.15

@speechbubble is 197 223 to 100%

sound scary_stab

    KIARA (talk_deny_neutral)

Maria ?!?!?

music drone_scary

volume music 100 0

    KIARA (react_mortified)

(So that means that ...)

@pan to zone 3 in 0.0

@CARLOS spot 1.259 415 104 in zone 3

@zoom reset

@CARLOS walks to spot 1.259 223 97 in 2

@speechbubble is 172 284 to 100%

    CARLOS (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)

What's going on here?

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@KIARA starts faint

@pause for 1.5

sound body_drop

@pause for 0.5

music off

INT. BLACK - DAY

@zoom reset

@pause for 2.5

@CARLOS spot 1.250 -131 31

@MARIA spot 1.250 500 70

@speechbubble is 132 305 to 100% with tail_top_left

    CARLOS

Kiara?

@speechbubble is 197 216 to 100% with tail_top_right

    MARIA

Miss kiara are you okey?!



    MARIA

Daddy she is going to died?

@speechbubble is 132 305 to 100% with tail_top_left

    CARLOS

No darling, she is sleeping.

@speechbubble is 197 216 to 100% with tail_top_right

    MARIA

Oh...

@pause for 3.0

    MARIA

And why doesn't she sleep in my bed and not in the kitchen that the floor is dirty?

@speechbubble is 132 305 to 100% with tail_top_left

    CARLOS

...

INT. COCINA ISLA DIA

music music_flutterbeat

volume music 100 3000

@KIARA spot 0.857 322 158 in zone 2

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA starts idle_lay_exhausted_loop

@zoom on 323 0 to 483% in 0

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@pause for 2.5

@speechbubble is 168 412 to 100% with tail_bottom_left

    KIARA

Where I am?

@zoom on 320 41 to 238% in 0

@CARLOS spot 0.854 103 27 in zone 2

@speechbubble reset

    CARLOS (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)

In my house.

@CARLOS starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

@speechbubble is 173 175 to 100% with tail_bottom_left

    KIARA

And how did I get here?

@speechbubble reset

    CARLOS (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)

I rescue you from the club.

@CARLOS starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

@speechbubble is 173 175 to 100% with tail_bottom_left

    KIARA

I don't remember.

@speechbubble reset

    CARLOS (talk_shrug_neutral)

Surely not.

@CARLOS starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop

@speechbubble is 173 175 to 100% with tail_bottom_left

    KIARA

Tell me I didn't do anything stupid.

@speechbubble reset

    CARLOS (talk_unsure)

Well...

sound dream_harp

@transition fade out white in 2

INT. CUARTO 2 NOCHE

music music_humdrum

volume music 50 3000

@set hsl 0 -100 0 no_colorize with blendMode NORMAL to 100% in 0

@CARLOS spot 0.791 -26 176 in zone 2

@KIARA spot 0.731 -39 178 in zone 2

@zoom on 473 36 to 142% in 0

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@transition fade in white in 2

&KIARA walks to spot 0.731 171 178 in 3 AND KIARA starts walk_sing_energetic_loop

@CARLOS walks to spot 0.791 93 170 in 3

@CARLOS starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

    KIARA (admire_happy)

Wow Mr. Carlos !

@KIARA faces left

    KIARA (talk_excited_happy)

Your house is beautiful.



    CARLOS (talk_shrug_neutral)

Call me only Carlos.

@CARLOS starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

    KIARA (talk_flirt_charming)

Owww you are bossy.


    KIARA (flirt_fingerbite_sexy)

I like it.

@zoom on 634 200 to 272% in 0

@KIARA spot 0.731 167 331

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA starts fall

@speechbubble is 166 416 to 100% with tail_bottom_right

    KIARA

Come on, whip me.

@zoom on 372 276 to 389% in 0

@KIARA spot 0.731 219 329

@CARLOS starts react_sit_confused

@CARLOS spot 0.791 97 236

@speechbubble is 184 206 to 100% with tail_top_left

    CARLOS

.....

@pause for 2.0

@zoom on 363 215 to 271% in 0

@CARLOS spot 0.791 93 170

@speechbubble reset

    CARLOS (sigh_disappointed)

Please kiara.


    CARLOS (talk_shrug_neutral)

You don't want a glass of-

@CARLOS starts think_rubchin

@pause for 2.5

@pan to zone 3 in 0.0

@zoom on 824 159 to 271% in 0

@KIARA spot 0.731 81 327 in zone 3

@KIARA faces left

@KIARA starts idle_lay_facedown_loop_rear

@pause for 3.0

    KIARA

*Snore*

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@zoom on 363 215 to 271% in 0

@CARLOS starts laugh_giggle

@pause for 2.5

    CARLOS

(She is crazy.)

volume music 0 3000

&CARLOS walks to spot 0.791 223 173 in 3

@pause for 2.0

sound dream_harp

@transition fade out white in 2

INT. COCINA ISLA DIA

music music_flutterbeat

volume music 100 3000

@KIARA spot 0.902 110 155 in zone 2

@CARLOS spot 0.992 211 140 in zone 2

@MARIA spot 0.560 257 178 in zone 2

@CARLOS moves to layer 2

@MARIA moves to layer 3

@CARLOS faces left

@KIARA faces right

@MARIA faces left

@KIARA starts standup_neutral

@CARLOS starts standup_neutral

@MARIA starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@reset hsl in 0.0

@zoom on 522 0 to 135% in 0

@transition fade in white in 2

@pause for 1.0

@CARLOS starts listen_nod_neutral_loop

@speechbubble is 173 328 to 100%

    KIARA (talk_exhausted)

I apologize for my behavior.


    KIARA (talk_shrug_neutral)

I never drink so much.


    CARLOS (talk_handsonhips_neutral)

No problem.

@KIARA starts idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    CARLOS (laugh_giggle)

Actually I found it funny.

@MARIA faces right

@speechbubble is 187 119 to 100%

    MARIA (talk_neutral_loop_rear)

Daddy.

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS starts transition_stand_to_squat_neutral

@pause for 1.0

@zoom on 571 92 to 310% in 0

@CARLOS spot 0.992 215 -12

@speechbubble is 173 328 to 100%

    CARLOS (talk_agree_happy)

Yes honey?

@CARLOS starts think_rubchin

    MARIA

Miss kiara can stay to play with me on the beach?



    MARIA

She is my favorite teacher.

@zoom on 401 338 to 413% in 0

@speechbubble is 173 173 to 100% with tail_top_left

    KIARA (flirt_coy)

(I want to fill her with kisses.)

@zoom on 522 0 to 135% in 0

@CARLOS spot 0.992 211 140

@MARIA faces left

@MARIA starts idle_bounce_happy_loop

@CARLOS starts standup_neutral

@pause for 2.0

@CARLOS faces left

@speechbubble is 173 328 to 100%

    CARLOS (talk_shrug_concerned)

Do you want to stay ?

@CARLOS starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop

@KIARA starts deepbreath

@pause for 2.5

@zoom on 396 289 to 281% in 0

    KIARA (idle_awkward_scratch_loop)

(I don't know this guy)


    KIARA

(A day ago we introduced ourselves.)


    KIARA

(What I do?)

choice (CARLOS) “Go away, you do not know if he’s a serial killer” {

@zoom on 522 0 to 135% in 0

readerMessage You missed the bonus scene

readerMessage -1 CARLOS / -1 MARIA

@CARLOS -1

@MARIA -1

@KIARA starts deepbreath

@pause for 2.3

@CARLOS starts deepbreath

@MARIA starts react_startled_surprised

    KIARA (talk_awkward_loop)

I have to go, I have things to do.

@CARLOS starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

@KIARA starts idle_awkward_uneasy_loop

@speechbubble is 168 127 to 100%

    MARIA (talk_sad)

Oh.. okey.

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS starts listen_nod_neutral_loop

    MARIA (talk_sad_serious_loop)

I'm going to my bedroom.

&MARIA walks to spot 0.560 372 181 in 3 AND MARIA starts walk_sad_loop

@CARLOS starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

@CARLOS faces left

@KIARA starts idle_sad_serious_loop

@pause for 2.0

@KIARA starts deepbreath

@pause for 2.5

@speechbubble is 173 328 to 100%

    CARLOS (talk_exhausted)

Hey, it's not problem.


    CARLOS (talk_shrug_neutral)

Do you want me to reach you somewhere?

@CARLOS starts listen_nod_neutral_loop

    KIARA (talk_sheepish_rubneck)

If you do not mind.

@KIARA starts listen_nod_neutral_loop

    CARLOS (talk_handsonhips_neutral)

Let's go.

volume music 0 3000

&KIARA walks to spot 0.902 -47 150 in 3

&CARLOS walks to spot 0.992 -23 135 in 3

@pause for 2.0

@transition fade out black in 2

EXT. MOUNTAIN ROAD LOOP - DAY with AUTO NEGRO

music music_yachtrock

volume music 80 3000

@speechbubble is 178 171 to 100%

@overlay 5469156241440768_AUTO NEGRO shifts to -329 18

@overlay 5469156241440768_AUTO NEGRO scales to 1.922 1.922

@zoom reset

@transition fade in black in 2

@pause for 3.5

INT. AUTO DIA

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA spot 2.432 109 -662 in zone 1

@pan to zone 1 in 0.0

@zoom on 37 125 to 154% in 0

    KIARA (idle_awkward_scratch_loop)

(How uncomfortable is this.)


    KIARA

(What do I tell him?)


    KIARA (think_rubchin)

(I don't know anything about this guy.)


    KIARA (talk_afraid)

And if he is a murderer?

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS spot 2.522 185 -657 in zone 2

@zoom on 585 77 to 142% in 0

    CARLOS (talk_shrug_neutral)

No.

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA spot 2.432 109 -662 in zone 1

@pan to zone 1 in 0.0

@zoom on 37 125 to 154% in 0

    KIARA (talk_think_neutral)

What?

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS spot 2.522 185 -657 in zone 2

@zoom on 585 77 to 142% in 0

    CARLOS (talk_shrug_neutral)

Answering your question, I'm not a murderer.

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA spot 2.432 109 -662 in zone 1

@pan to zone 1 in 0.0

@zoom on 37 125 to 154% in 0

    KIARA (talk_deny_neutral)

I said it out loud?

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS spot 2.522 185 -657 in zone 2

@zoom on 585 77 to 142% in 0

    CARLOS (laugh_chuckle)

Yes.

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA spot 2.432 109 -662 in zone 1

@pan to zone 1 in 0.0

@zoom on 37 125 to 154% in 0

    KIARA (talk_exhausted)

This day can not go from bad to worse.

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS spot 2.522 185 -657 in zone 2

@zoom on 585 77 to 142% in 0

    CARLOS (talk_unsure)

Let's talk a little-


    CARLOS (talk_agree_happy)

So we can get to know each other a little better.


    CARLOS (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)

What do you want to know about me?

goto me_fui

gain go_away

} “Let’s get to know this man better” {

@zoom on 522 0 to 135% in 0

readerMessage Bonus scene!

readerMessage +1 CARLOS / +1 MARIA

@CARLOS +1

@MARIA +1

@KIARA starts deepbreath

@pause for 2.3

@MARIA starts admire_happy

    KIARA (talk_agree_happy)

Okey.

@MARIA starts dance_shake_happy_loop

    CARLOS (talk_unsure)

You will stay?



    KIARA (talk_flirt_coy)

Yes.

@KIARA starts laugh_giggle

@CARLOS starts laugh_chuckle

@speechbubble is 187 119 to 100%

    MARIA (dance_wavehands_happy_loop)

Wiiiiiiiiiiii !

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS starts listen_nod_neutral_loop

@KIARA starts idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop

    MARIA (talk_excited_happy)

I'm going to change my clothes.

&MARIA walks to spot 0.560 405 184 in 3 AND MARIA starts run_athletic_neutral_loop

@speechbubble is 173 328 to 100%

    KIARA (talk_unsure)

So...

@zoom on 545 348 to 290% in 0

@CARLOS faces left

@speechbubble is 158 201 to 100%

    CARLOS (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)

You need to take your clothes off.

@zoom on 410 328 to 392% in 0

sound record_scratch_stop

    KIARA (talk_deny_neutral)

What?!

@zoom on 545 348 to 290% in 0

    CARLOS (talk_shrug_neutral)

If you want to go to the beach you must wear a bikini.

@zoom on 410 328 to 392% in 0

    KIARA (talk_sheepish_rubneck)

Oh, yes...



    KIARA (talk_think_neutral)

But, I do not have a bikini.

@zoom on 545 348 to 290% in 0

@CARLOS starts think_rubchin

@pause for 3.0

    CARLOS (talk_think_neutral)

I have an idea.


    CARLOS (talk_handsonhips_neutral_loop)

Come on let's go.

@CARLOS starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@zoom on 522 0 to 135% in 0

@speechbubble is 173 328 to 100%

    KIARA (talk_deny_neutral)

Where?

@KIARA starts react_gasp_dismayed

@CARLOS faces right

    CARLOS (callout_neutral)

Maria, I come in a minutes! Do not leave without me, okay?

@CARLOS faces left

&CARLOS walks to spot 0.992 -68 146 in 3

    MARIA

Yes daddy !


    MARIA

I'm going to watch pokemon in the meantime.

@KIARA faces left

    KIARA (callout_neutral)

Hey ! Wait me !

volume music 0 3000

&KIARA walks to spot 0.902 -44 157 in 2 AND KIARA starts run_athletic_neutral_loop

@pause for 2.0

@transition fade out black in 2

EXT. MOUNTAIN ROAD LOOP - DAY with AUTO NEGRO

music music_yachtrock

volume music 80 3000

@speechbubble is 178 171 to 100%

@overlay 5469156241440768_AUTO NEGRO shifts to -329 18

@overlay 5469156241440768_AUTO NEGRO scales to 1.922 1.922

@zoom reset

@transition fade in black in 2

@pause for 3.5

INT. AUTO DIA

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA spot 2.432 109 -662 in zone 1

@pan to zone 1 in 0.0

@zoom on 37 125 to 154% in 0

    KIARA (idle_awkward_scratch_loop)

(How uncomfortable is this.)


    KIARA

(What do I tell him?)


    KIARA (think_rubchin)

(I don't know anything about this guy.)


    KIARA (talk_afraid)

And if he is a murderer?

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS spot 2.522 185 -657 in zone 2

@zoom on 585 77 to 142% in 0

    CARLOS (talk_shrug_neutral)

No.

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA spot 2.432 109 -662 in zone 1

@pan to zone 1 in 0.0

@zoom on 37 125 to 154% in 0

    KIARA (talk_think_neutral)

What?

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS spot 2.522 185 -657 in zone 2

@zoom on 585 77 to 142% in 0

    CARLOS (talk_shrug_neutral)

Answering your question, I'm not a murderer.

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA spot 2.432 109 -662 in zone 1

@pan to zone 1 in 0.0

@zoom on 37 125 to 154% in 0

    KIARA (talk_deny_neutral)

I said it out loud?

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS spot 2.522 185 -657 in zone 2

@zoom on 585 77 to 142% in 0

    CARLOS (laugh_chuckle)

Yes.

@KIARA faces right

@KIARA spot 2.432 109 -662 in zone 1

@pan to zone 1 in 0.0

@zoom on 37 125 to 154% in 0

    KIARA (talk_exhausted)

This day can not go from bad to worse.

@pan to zone 2 in 0.0

@CARLOS faces right

@CARLOS spot 2.522 185 -657 in zone 2

@zoom on 585 77 to 142% in 0

    CARLOS (talk_unsure)

Let's talk a little-


    CARLOS (talk_agree_happy)

So we can get to know each other a little better.


    CARLOS (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)

What do you want to know about me?

goto que_de

gain kn_ow

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