“The Not So Royal Wedding” (Feedback Needed)

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#1

Hey Guys! I published “The Not So Royal Wedding”! So far I have three episodes but I have more! I just want to publish them one episode at a time so people can catch up and shit. Go follow me on Instagram : episode_sierra


#2

Do you need any art

And I read it


#3

I do need art but I know for a fact that you don’t read my story because I published it like 10 minutes ago and it says no reads yet :disappointed_relieved:


#4

I read your story would you like some feedback?


#5

Absolutely! I’m happy to hear what everyone thinks (btw I know the episodes are short)


#6

First of all the episode might have not been the longest in the world but it was not to short…so don’t worry about that. When you are writing I would make sure that every sentence has an anamation to go with it just to give the story some action. Also I would make sure that you take you time writing your story just because I know most people would rather read a well thought out story then a rushed mess…(but saying your story is) and the last thing is that I noticed there was a lot of panning to different zones. I would say just cut down on the panning a bit just becasue for me it became a little to much. Other then that I really like the theme of your story and I hope you continue to write.


#7

Hope that helps:)


#8

It does! Thank you SO much! And ya I know it might seem a bit rushed because it is my first story so I was eager to finish it… But thanks for your feedback!


#10

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#11