Hey, sorry I haven’t been that active… one my cats kittens just passed… I’ll be on later though.
No need to be sorry! I’m sorry to hear that. Hope you’re doing okay
I’m really happy to have you in this group!
@Maya_Reihnard @jessica.epi @Dying_Dreams @Annasilveroriginal
Oh, we’re fewer than I thought (I know Maya has problems with the app, some of you are busy and @/Dying_Dreams is mostly just liking stuff lol hahaha, thanks for the support)
Should we start with Benio by @/LiaLopez?
I thought three weeks worked well. How about you?
My app isn’t working rn. Idk if I can start…
Aw, that’s too bad but no worries Start whenever you can/have time
Okay, so I read the first chapter of Benio and I had no idea what to expect because I never read the description
Anyways, here are my thoughts:
I liked the intro, it was visually cool and had a good use of music!
When it came to character customization I was blind and couldn’t see the “next” buttons. I got frustrated over not finding anything I liked and thought it was a weird limited customization template… but turns out I was blind! (I must read more on Episode.)
Did not know that this was a prequel, might read the first one
To be honest, I thought that the story was enjoyable and good so far but I was really confused most of the time. It was funny, Benio is really cute and relatable, but I’m just really confused. Did she write a story about her friends? They took the train to go somewhere to meet their friends and then there were other friends who started to fix their hair?
This is a comedy and I would say that it was a funny one A lot of what they said, for example about being a writer was relatable and the relationships between the characters were cute. But yep, I was confused
I’ll continue with it soon!
Hey Macarena! Oh, I remember that dance!
This part was funny but I had no idea what happened.
She’s really weird and I like it!
It took me a while to get how these people were related but I think I got it now!
What are they doing there? I’m so confused… and what happened with the other friends?
The directing was good! There were some places where not everything was lined up “perfectly” but overall good with spots and zooms and use of sound and music
Amazing review lil bunny
cuerpo means body right, taking a wild guess as it sounds so much like corps (French word for body)
Hahaha thanks! Was that aaa reviewww?
(I will do a review later, that’s more put together with points and stuff when I’ve read all the chapters. This was just some reactions of a tired and confused version of me, I wasn’t in a state for reading )
It does sound similar, my Spanish isn’t that good though
Haha thanks for the support Jem! Love you!
It does
You know Spanish and German?
I only know a little Spanish (so I don’t really know it ), but I can speak Italian and German obviously
oops, I also forgot French
That’s so cool! (And English )
Yep, if you ever want to talk or if you want to tell me which languages you know, you can PM me. I don’t want to spam this wonderful thread. I love how you put so much work into this and your other threads.
Idk if you saw it
The weird things are explained in “Rewinded Life”, as I didn’t want to overload the plot with a lot of fantasy stuff.
Hahaha fantasy? Wow I’ve read two more chapters and it’s not as confusing at all! I’m starting to like it a lot haha. Benio seems to be so sweet, positive and funny
Aww thanks a lot! I’m glad you liked my crazy story.
Indeed, Benio is my childish side. I just go wild on her story, lol!
Yup, fantasy. That explains why there’s talking junk food in my weird universe.
Hahaha I thought that was purely for a comedic purpose not that they actually were alive Sooo the toilet is real too?
Hahahaha, yes! Evaristo is alive. I wonder what your reaction will be when you see Miss V.
Seriously, sometimes I wonder what’s wrong with me.
Hahaha omg… I probably wouldn’t feel too comfortable going on a living toilet and I just read the fourth chapter They’re so cute together! (more screenshots are coming soon )
You’re perfectly normal/crazy!
Hahaha, I think it would be fun to have a living toilet.
Like: Fraud, when are you going to clean me up? Don’t I have the right to be clean like any other living thing?! - Dramatic music -
Aww, I know! I love that couple.