I actually don’t mind a really good pregnancy story if it actually serves a purpose of telling a story between the expecting mother, baby father and how a child will affect their lives. Not just glorifying pregnancy.
A few things I can’t stand in a story is when it promises customization (as I am a big fan of that) but limits your choices to like nose shape or eyebrows. If your stories’ character is supppsed to look a certain way, don’t add customization or tell me you created art to portray your character a certain way. It makes no sense!
Another thing is bad directing. I’m not a genius with coding and I’m sure it’s a lot of effort to create stories on Episode and make them look good. But gosh, at least try. Just make an effort or get some help or something because I cannot read a story where the character just looks like they’re lagging.
Plot development. For a story focused on a bad boy, I expect to get that. But I don’t expect it in the first five seconds of the chapter. Where is the development? How did the “bad boy” come to be? Why does the bad boy have to be so rude? Oh, they share the same class and now have to work on a project together? Cool, I guess we’ll be seeing them making out in chapter two after that one project makes them both realize they’ve been in love with each other. What happend to characters GETTING to know each other and taking it from there? So many stories lack development and rush the plot that I’m tired of having to search for the good ones.
And basically everything else said by @Purple_Ghost and @thesoulpunk.
