Things in stories that make you NOT want to finish

There was this author who has published like 10 stories and all of them end with an unfinished ending because she is starting a new story (if that makes any sense). It demonstrates a complete and utter lack of care towards her stories. I will not disclose the name of the author because she is the forums and I don’t want her to feel bad.

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Wtf…

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Wow, I would at least think about the ending as I go on.

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Yeah. It’s brutal.

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I have read at least 7 of her stories. Only one has a sort of decent ending.

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Can you PM the name of one her stories, I would like to give it a try?

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I sent you a message, @AMagic

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There was only one story I stopped reading and it was because of the bad grammar, for real, it was so bad I couldn’t understand what the characters were saying

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When the younger guy or older woman, force themselves on each other.

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Eek, IKR

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You guys say you hate shy-weak girls who can’t stand up for themselves, maybe I should point out 90% of people who are getting bullied can’t stand up for themselves. I have a story she is getting bullied, she says hi and they talk about her. That’s what some people do, most can’t stand up for themselves. It’s sad but true.

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This is more of a silly pet peeve, but I’ve decided…
I cannot stand when authors include customization of the male Li and say “ps. Make him hot “wink wink.”

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Reading these comments, makes for a lot of really good tips that many writers should take note of. I have read many episodes and like most of you, I’ve encountered most, if not all, of what has been mentioned.

On the other side, I feel like I wanna go run and cry in my corner because I’m hoping my first story doesn’t get on anyone’s sh*t list… I feel like I’m guilty of all these pet peeves (hopefully not) :tired_face: :sweat: I’m always down for reviews of what I could do better…

I personally hate:
Covers that look the exact same (half naked 10 pack of abs men and blonde/brunette/redhead bombshell)
Horrible grammar
confusing ass stories

plus more, which a lot of commenters have already mentioned

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Agree

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Lmfao 10 pack XD
It’s even worse when it’s airbrushed on

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lol right… I’m like ok, here we gooooo :roll_eyes:

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Name of your story beautiful? I’d love to check it out…

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It’s not out yet, but I will let you know if I need help or when it’s out, Rose :rose:.

That’s true. Most people who are bullied either are too afraid, or tried but it didn’t work. :gift_heart:

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I’ll look forward to it :purple_heart :purple_heart: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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