I am a reader and an author… I definitely stop reading a story:
If the story has a lot of black screens (I don’t know why, but I wanna read a story with animations and backgrounds, not a story with only black screens and a few words… )
The author may be in the story (to be honest) but not too much… (Not half of the telling-time in an episode and not in every episode…);
When there is a mean girl in it, that likes to see the MC getting hurt (starts to get boring to me…);
When it’s a story that supports racism against cultures or the lgbtqPLUS-sector;
When it’s a story that glorifies violence or toxic relationships;
I don’t mind reading a story with spelling errors (I am not a native English speaker, too…), but please not to many spelling errors in the story (that’s annoys the sh* out of me… )
Last but not least → lack of directing (I am not saying that I am the best in directing… But I learned after lot of test-writing), especially bad layer-directing (like people kissing in the air instead of each other )
i agree with all of them except the 3rd one because sometimes they actually have something important to say, buttt if it ain’t something important yeah its annoying .
Sometimes for me the advanced directing can be really annoying and having them shift from one zone to another gives me a headache, a better way to put it is when the transitioning is not smooth
Also when there is a plot that goes really fast like oh, you meet the characters and they fall in love and have kids in like the first few episodes I actually read some of a story where this happened
Stereotypes on a gender, race, orientation, or culture
When you’ve to customize the MC, the LI, the MC’s mom, MC’s dad, MC’s sibling/s, MC’s best friend, MC’s second best friend, LI’s mom, LI’s dad, LI’s sibling/s, LI’s best friend in the first chapter at the beginning and you can’t skip any of it.