When the MC or LI have major jealousy issues. 
When the MC or LI like each other too much.
When directing is horrible.
When the plot is confusing.
When details in the story are inaccurate. For example - I messaged an author on how they used American words in a story set in England. They told me that they were doing it so the majority of readers would understand (she apparently has British friends so she already knew) and I was like ok, I am sorry I didn’t know. But then in her story she said they would go to the gun shop. They were in a shopping centre in the UK but said there was a gun shop. If you know anything about the UK I think you get what the problem is.
Really poor spelling and that is coming from someone who is horrible at spelling.
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