Third time, can I please have a proof reader?

I posted this three times already about asking for a proof reader for my story. So far, no one has read pass part 3 of my story. Usually busy, with school/work/family/etc which I fully understand but I have my first 9 parts ready to be reviewed and no one has read that far yet. I had a lot that responded but they stop messaging after a few days or even months…
I just need someone who can put in the time for this. I’m not saying it needs to be done right away, as long as I hear from you occasionally it’s fine.
I need feedback for the story line, grammar (my grammar isn’t that good), etc…
Please, can someone be a proof-reader for my story… please…

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