Hi,
I have trouble with this choice in particular:
INT. ITALIAN RESTAURANT OL - NIGHT
NARRATOR
Erase this last two lines.
choice
“I could have attacked better from there”{
@MC1 spot 1.280 63 53 in zone 2
@MC1 moves to layer 0
@speechbubble is 145 227 to 123% with tail_top_right
MC1 (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
I could have attacked him better from there.
@zoom reset
cut to zone 3
@JIN +1
@LEISA -1
@LEISA is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop AND KUNAQ is idle
@pause for 2
@speechbubble is 116 235 to 112% with tail_top_right
JIN (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
Sure, scaredycat.
@speechbubble is 127 252 to 110% with tail_top_right
JIN (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
I was born laid-back Leisa, haven’t you noticed by now?
&LEISA is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop AND JIN is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop
@speechbubble is 204 252 to 110% with tail_top_right
KUNAQ (talk_doubtful)
True, if you just wanted to look tough, not a very wise choice of words.
@speechbubble is 135 246 to 102% with tail_top_right
JIN (talk_deny_neutral)
Hold your horses, inquisitors.
JIN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Let’s ask the victim here.
@MC1 spot 1.280 80 151 in zone 2
@MC1 moves to layer 0
@cut to zone 2
@zoom on RAOUL to 100% in 0
&MC1 is idle_sit_serious_loop
RAOUL (talk_startled_neutral)
Me? Well-I
@cut to zone 3
JIN (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
Heh, that’s cute.
&JIN is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@speechbubble is 117 251 to 102% with tail_top_left
LEISA (talk_apathetic)
Well, you can’t be that much of a menace if you’re willing to sabotage yourself just because of your pride.
}
The weird about this is that other choices in my story don’t give me error.
Sorry if the dialogue doesn’t make sense, I cut some stuff of it trying to make it work.
Thanks for reading!