This is my first post on here. I am writing a thriller

I am working on a story called Thriller: Murder in a Small Town. If anyone wants to read it and give suggestions on how I am doing. That would be a lot of help. I am trying to get better at coding. The story involves a murder. It also has lgbt characters and a sexuality choice. the link to the story is.



Name: The Ember Moon Pack


Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way.
Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight


Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:


R4R. Is read for read right?

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I am willing to read peoples first two chapter of their stories, if they want to read the first chapter of my story.