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Could you please review my story?

Title: Many Miles and Years Away
Author:Booklady1017
Style: ink
Chapters: currently 6, revamping
Genre: Adventure
Description: Laura, a young woman from 1810 mistakenly uses a magical ring and ends up in 2017. What is the story with the ring and what will she do?

I’ll read yours too, soon. It looks interesting!

Hey there Clarkies! I would like to request you for a story review because yours are detailed and very constructive.
My story is called: Imperfections
Genre: Drama/Action/Mystery/Fantasy
Style: INK
Customisation: Limited
Number of episodes I would like you to read: 3 or as many as you want x
Description: It’s 2270 in New York - the era where society ia controlled by perfection and power in the city of golden opportunities. Will Jade, Hazel and Eliana embrace their imperfections and battle a dangerous scandal threatening their lives or will they drown in defeat? The battle for equality begins.
If you have any questions, dm me on instagram @storiesbyonyx

Hey there, @clarkies!

Thank you for reading and reviewing our stories. Would you like to read mine?

Title: Your Secret Admirer
Genre: Romance
Description: What happens when Natalia’s secret love letter ends up in the hands of the wrong boy? Will she fall in love or will everything fall apart?
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4654341800198144
Comments on: Direction, Writing, Plot, Character Development

I have added your story to my list and I’ll be sure to check it out! :smiley: Would it be okay if you PM me the review?

I hope you’ll enjoy my story.

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Hi @clarkies!! Please read & review @S.Dsana and I’s newly published story when you get time! :blush:

Story title: Quiet Confidence
Author’s Name: Winter05 with S.Dsana
Genre: Drama
Story style: INK
Description of the story: People don’t talk to you, not because of anything because of your status what will happen when a billionaire sets his eyes on you to take you to the top?
Number of episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Instagrams: @winter05.episode with @princesssana_sa
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4942036682014720
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Feel free to leave fanmail or PM me feedback! We hope you enjoy it!! :heart:

~ Winter :snowflake:

Hi @clarkies!! Please read & review mine newly published story when you get time! :blush:

Story title: Fantastical: Virtues of Destiny
Author’s Name: S.Dsana
Genre: Fantasy
Story style: INK
Description of the story: "Evil is rising, truth is surpassing, but what will happen when they find out who they really are? Is this going to lead to love, hate, revenge or magical encounter.
Choices Matter
Number of episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Instagram: @princesssana_sa
Link:

Feel free to leave fanmail or PM me feedback! I hope you enjoy it!! :heart:

-S.Dsana

Hey there! I hope you’re still making reviews :blush: if so, I’d love to get som feedback for my story!!

Title: Fantastical: Regnum Fortes
About: You’re a set of twins which were suddenly zapped into a realm you never even knew about. What now?
Episodes: 3 (on-going)
What to expect:

  • This story uses a point system! (Choices actually matter.)
  • This story has a wide variety of Love Interests! Even options for the LGBT community!
  • Some pretty rad effects! (50+ overlays and backgrounds were used!)
  • Fighting scenes!
  • Plot twists you never saw coming!
  • Diverse characters!
  • Text effects!
  • + Many more features!

Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912
Instagram: emberpackepisode :smile::heartbeat:

Title: Problems of a Black Teenager
Genre: Comedy
Description: Come see life through the eyes of a black teenage girl, see her perspective on family, friends, school, and life.
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5397891994222592

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