Thoughts on my first chapter?

Finally finished my draft for the first episode of my story, and needed more opinions on the writing so far. It’s very open to editing and suggestions. It’s a gay Romance/Supernatural story, both aspects of which I plan to get more into later in the story.

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Heyyy I would love to read your first episode! Give me just a few minutes since I can’t access the stories throughout the computer! So I need to go to my cellphone :sweat_smile: :sweat_smile:

I am having a few issues, the app does not let me load the story it says for me to click in the button and read it but it doesn’t do anything. This happened to me already yesterday but I have no idea why :sob: do you know how to fix it? So I can read it??

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My apologies, I don’t know what could be causing it. I haven’t had the same error.

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hey! this issue is common.
are you an android user?

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Yes I’m :sweat_smile:

oh well same.
this feature is not available on androids yet :roll_eyes: I hope they add it soon!
the same goes for profiles (they are down for us)

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Yeah I had also noticed the profiles :slightly_frowning_face: :sweat_smile:

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And more information on the story itself.

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