Thoughts On My Story Cover?

Hey, community! :blob_sun:

So, this beautiful and incredibly wonderful cover for my story “Dangerous Opposition” was done by @KikiMoon :

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I have no doubts about the aspect of the background with the art, but with the text.
What do you think about the title?
I think it’s too small, but I wanted to know your opinion.

Thank you, Maddy.

PS – I will still add some details to the title, for example highlights in the letters, I just wanted to make sure there were no mistakes before doing so.

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like the cover but i feel like the opposition is hard to read

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Exactly, I think that too. I really liked the font but it is very thin, I will try to make it bigger and thicker.

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Some constructive criticism; the shading could be better, it’s a common mistake to shade with black and highlight with white, perhaps try lighter/darker shade of flat colours. or blue-ish for shades

If you’d like the characters to be more in-focus I suggest making them bigger, except if the background is important OR make the title above them, it would make it more visible as well.

Hope this helps…

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Right now it’s like this, I forgot to update this thread, but I’ve already made the necessary changes and I think it’s better now.

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This looks much better!
If you’re still open to suggestions, I’d recommend centering the text “Dangerous” and then lowering the position of the text “Opposition” a tiny bit.

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This looks stunning! There’s literally nothing wrong with this.
Also, the boy reminds me of montague from Fortnite


Which is a very good thing in my opinion :heart_eyes:

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Now I can’t stop looking at the boy in your cover what witchcraft have you done to meee :smiling_face_with_tear::smiling_face_with_tear:

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That’s sick, the effects like the blurring and highlights are so well done and it’s so well detailed

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