Time To Get A Bit Harsh


#1

Hey ya’ll! It’s Dasha here!
I’m getting bored, so why not do something good, am I right? Okie, so, whoever wants their story reviewed, this is what you MUST write what I tell you below.
Title:
Author:
Genre:
Mini description:
Link:
Here’s what’s going to happen. I’m going to become a HARSH critic. What you may get is some HARSH feedback, depending on the story. Although, please understand, I’m not doing this to hurt anybody’s feelings. I’m doing this so then your story will become better and get more reads!
Understand?
Yes?
Good, good.
Comment below for some AWESOME criticism.

  • Dasha

#2

Hey, I’ve been looking for harsh feedbsck so this sounds great, thanks! This is my story:

Name: Reformed
Author: Cordelia M
Genre: Romance
Description: Violet gave up a life of petty crime and way too much black leather over a year ago. New bad boy Carter can’t seem to resist trying to uncover her dark past. Is she truly reformed?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4696324662099968

Thanks again! Hope you enjoy the story :yellow_heart:


#3

Thank you so much for doing this. :slight_smile:
Title: **Falling for a Superstar **
Author: Nishee
Genre: Romance
Description: Nicole unknowingly kisses a Superstar. Revelation, Differences, Acceptance! In the world of fame, can true love win?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6115422028038144


#4

Love your background!


#5

Thank you so much :blush: :slight_smile:


#6

Did u make it?


#7

Sort of. Downloaded the background and added the title and characters. :slight_smile:


#8

Oops you meant if I made the background? I thought you meant the whole cover. No I didn’t. Downloaded it.


#9

Hi thanks for doing this! I’m a new creator and I need some comments and critics.:grin:

Title : Senior Crush
Author : Daisy
Genre : Romance
Mini description : A story about a girl named Leia who falls in love with Tim, her seatmate while trying to set him up with her best friend, Maia.
Link : https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5786322816335872


#10

Hi,

I would love some feedback on my story. it isn’t published yet, so you’d need to click on the link provided below.

Title: Stained Love
Author: Micah
Episodes: 2
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6428950499033088

Thank you so much for this :wink:


#11

Hey ya’ll, sry if Ima taking a while, I promise I’ll get to all of your stories! :smile:


#12

Please PM me the review
Title: Niklaus’s Grandchildren
Author: Jazmend esparza
Genre : Drama
Description: Meet Niklaus grandchildren all 7 of them. turns out hope was the first born after all. Or was she?
Style: INK
Episodes Released: 10 (ongoing)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6153081077366784

Thanks


#13

Hey there, @dasha_author! I hope you’re still giving reviews, because an honest (and harsh) critique is just what I was looking for! Here are my story details:

Title: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Mini description: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6116658762874880

Looking forward to my review! Thank you so much!


#14

Alright ya’ll!


#15

Thank you for making this thread! I would love some HARSH critisicm on my story…


#16

Title: Love Has No Color
Author: Brenda Adams (or limelight stories)
Genre: Drama
Description: Naturelle is finally able to attend public school for her senior year. She ends up meeting a charming boy that has dark family secrets What happens when those secrets get revealed?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5700092797779968


#17

Title: The Quest (Classic) COMPLETE

Author: Cricket Master

Genre: Adventure

Mini Description: Matt is a NEET who wakes up in a different world. What happens when he is sent on a mission to rescue some princesses? (I swear this is not a harem romance.)

Link:

I plan to revise this soon (especially the directing in the third chapter), and I need some HARSH reviewing and AWESOME criticism.
I would appreciate it if you sent the review by way of a private message.

Thank you for your time,

Cricket
:cricket:


#18

Thanks so much for reading it!
Title: Sucked Into The Mafia
Author: Alyssa Tyler
Genre: Romance
Mini description: You transferred schools to get away from all the drama, crime, and bad boys. What happens when fate bumps you into a ruthless mafia leader. You decide!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5520994526953472


#19

Title: The Ember Moon Pack
Author: Giselle Crescent
Genre: Fantasy
Mini description: ChoicesMatterImagine being the Queen of the hybrids. What would you do? Will love get in the way of ruling your Kingdom? EPISODE 4 OUT NOW! Please stay tuned every week for more.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912


#20

I’m sorry, but due to being busy often, it’ll take a while to get through all of your stories. Not only that, but I’ll ask @Jeremy or @Ryan to close this topic because I don’t have as much time anymore to review stories. :disappointed:

I’m sorry ya’ll, I’ll get through the stories that asked to be reviewed above.