To be honest.
I don’t know if I am good enough to give advice but here is some advice from my personal expirence.
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You should add Character’s POV in the story, so readers can understand the Character well.
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Don’t use @CHAR enters from left to screen center often. Use this only for a small scene. for long scenes u should use like @CHAR enters from left to spot xyz in zone 1/2/3
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Play your story and see for yourself if there is any mistake, (play in App for once atleast) before publishing or updating your story.
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At last u should see if speech bubbles is at right place.
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Using Text effect is good, but don’t use it everywhere just for some specific person or thing.
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Code smoothly.
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I see that author use the same outfits, there should be enough outfits (if there isn’t a reason for the same outfits again and again)
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Adding choices and CC
After Publishing your story
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There will be some review which will upset you but You should listen to them and improve instead of being upset and leave writing.
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Don’t be sad if you don’t get good reads.
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Well… I think I should add this advice before but you should choose your story description carefully and cover too… bcz it’s what attract the reader to your story.
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If you don’t have any ig account then make one… bcz it’s a good platform to spread your story.