some of those advice are actually really bad@Kat.epi , if you like to this stuff then you do you, its your story
too much transitions get anoying. its a thing you use sparelingly, you dont transition to go life, from the bedroom to the liveing room. you do it with time shift, or charatere shift.
really many actually hate this, its feels like the author wanna be the center of attention. I am guilty of have done this in my first story. escpially when the author charatere, is like I am the author I make decisions, the charaters do as I say.