Hi!
I’m not a talented author or anything but I’ve one for a year now so I guess I have some advice from experience to tell 
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I’d recommend adding transitions to every scene so it can be more smooth
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Also you can add some characters that are more for comedy scenes or be like more from the reader’s POV
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You can add yourself to the story as a side character as well it’s fun to watch the author in the stories, I’ve seen authors doing it and I’m starting on doing it too
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I’d also recommend planning your story before starting to code, what every episode will contain of and things like that (I’ve made a planner let me know if you’d like me to send it to you for extra help)
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I don’t think I have anything else but feel free to ask me anything (either about coding and everything else, also a template maker and edit so I can help you there too, if you ever need something you can request it at my shop which you can find in my bio❤️)
(These are all my personal tips so feel free not to use any of them 
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Good luck with your story 