Coding:
Dara’s site. It helps me honestly so much. All Script Commands | Dara Amarie
Story:
Make sure your plot doesn’t get boring. Try to avoid filling scenes (like the MC just singing in the shower and nothing else happening).
Show the MC walk somewhere, go in somewhere from time to time, not always, but at least the first time they go there it is good to do.
I have a thread with 35 questions, a few people took the time to answer, it might help you too (it is story related)
Questions for readers