Tips for smooth, flowing scenes?

y’all just atp im gonna be up here asking y’all questions everyday bc I really need help if I want this story to be successful. okay so when I read my story back in the previewer (after I spent hours coding one scene🤡) the scenes never seem to flow well, yk? it’s rushed and it’s choppy and there’s barely any dialogue. can y’all share some tips that you have or strategies that helped you when writing your first stories?

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Using the & symbol, instead of the @ symbol for some commands, usually helps me to achieve a smooth scene :blush:

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