Tips on how to slow down a story?

Hi! I’m trying to write a story and I feel like it’s a bit rushed http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5664934106169344

Just the first 1-3 chapters if you wan to read it, but any tips on trying to slow it down?

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Hi! I could read it and give feedback:)

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Thank you so much!

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Moved to Share Feedback since you’re asking for feedback on your story. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :wink:

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